All Comments on 'Naughty Naomi Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing!

Way to up the ante! This was absolutely the best chapter yet. I can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
seriously

seriously hot!

DaddtPooDaddtPooover 9 years ago
PooDaddy love

Daddy would have taken you home with him and Wwe would have had more nasty fun and Daddy would never have you use a potty again...at least not in a normal way. Ou would live with my other two little girls.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A Word Of Caution

An excellent story, I really enjoyed reading. If I may, however, give a small word of caution? I would take care how you word the last paragraph. You say that if it's not disgusting, Naomi isn't that interested. But disgusting sexual acts cover a broad range, venturing far into the realms of illegality. A reword may be in order, though that is, of course, for you to decide. Otherwise a very enjoyable read, thank you.

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