All Comments on 'Near Miss'

Great presentation of the emotions of experiencing fulfillment of sexual urges for the first time.

Sweet tale of the traumas and delights of sexual exploration and discovery.

Well written coming of age story of a new young gyrl.

I have to say this was a very good story. Well done on all the details and pacing and the time taken to give the excitement of Jesse to build. You captured the exhilaration and worrisome humiliation of being caught beautifully. I hope you keep writing stories as good as this one.

Thanks, -S-

Realistic, thrilling and tense exploration of gender choices. Written with sensitivity about the hopes, joys and doubts. Thanks for sharing.

You captured both his wonder and his panicky anticipation excellently. I know I've read this several times, and was surprised I'd not praised you before now. Thanks for sharing this beauty.

Another chapter?

Please

Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Lia Monde had a knack of keeping the reader on the edge of their seat. The finale was both unexpected & enjoyable. If only more women could be so tolerant & understanding.