All Comments on 'Near Vacation Ch. 02'

Keep looking you horny little toad. Great story.

You have the makings of a great saga.....Keep it going as long as you can...

I see trouble ahead. Oh, not for the characters but for the writer. From the last paragraph it's easy to infer that Traci is to become involved. That's the problem. She's sixteen. Literotica has a policy prohibiting underage participants, i.e., characters under 18 must be sideline characters at best and not engage in a sexual activities.

Don't you have anything better to do than to look for numbers? Sixteen is my favorite age - and it's legal in my state! I have difficulty with people who are self-certified cops.

Beautiful story, nicely written. But if you could make a little more graphic it would nicer still. Like you use the word body for cock. Say cock, pussy, cunt, tits to describe parts of body.

just a word

Still a very weird story...his "hard body"...what is that about? & still some other "off" writing styles...