All Comments on 'Need'

Great job writing, but there's hardly a plot to it. Maybe a couple twists and more description would do it. You set up a very good beginning, but in the actual erotic part you didn't do much. Just some things to think about.

I teared up a little thinking about the same longing i have felt. Great story

This was so romantic. It reminds me of my Master. Thank you for the enjoyable story. :-)

I really liked it, so romantic!