All Comments on 'Negril Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Is it Diane or Diana?

You keep changing the name of Daphne's mother. It takes away from the flow of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Your threesomes.stories are hot.tho, please keep.going

JuanCarlosIIJuanCarlosIIalmost 3 years ago

Awesome! Great idea! Great writing, it flowed, and climaxed!!!

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