All Comments on 'New Friends'

I think there could be more build up after the intro but some people are abrupt. Great start to any number of scenarios. Keep writing.

This is a great start. I'm sure there will be a part 2?

That is the best I can give this. A story of this type told from the pov of the other person is, by default, told from the perspective of the one with the least at risk. As a result the tension just is not there.

***That what you call a Quickie!! No not the sex! This story!! Thanks for the read.