All Comments on 'New Girl at Work Ch. 01'

by whisky_sour

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Bravo first timer.

Your command of the English language is really very good (only a few minor grammatical errors). Even more impressive was the original and imaginative content of your very sexy story. I do hope this will be the first of many more.

SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffover 11 years ago
New Writer Gets a Five

But what else would you expect from a guy with a username like SoleBrotherJeff !!

Anxiously awaiting Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Brilliant

One of the best stories I've ever read. The detail, the slow intro, the foot smelling...

Just fantastic, can't wait for Ch. 2!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
lol damn

fucking amazing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Interesting. Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
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what happened need part 2 and more

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Control

The control she has on him is superb

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