All Comments on 'New Life Ch. 01'

TERRIFIC START - HOPE THERE IS MORE!

You've laid the ground work for what could be a really interesting story, I hope you're able to keep up the high standard you've set for yourself.

Pete

I like how you write. You lay the background of what I hope will be a great story. Keep going.

Loved it! So sad when I realised it was only 1 of 1! I hope your write more I want to read on!

the guy was unconscious for some days. so he would have been connected to catheter. i think you should have delayed his sexual encounter.