All Comments on 'New Life, Here We Come Ch. 05'

great read. i agree with the comment that the chapters here are all a little short. except for the last sex scene even the sex seems quick. but its a very sexy erotic read.

If you like reading cliff notes, you'll love this story. Try giving more detail. And try not to make the daughter sound stupid, she's 18, not 12, 18 year olds know more about sex than you think, probably by the time they're 12.

this is one oof the best story and keepit up

The writing has fewer off-putting errors and the father-daughter scenes were the best yet in this series.

I wonder at all of the comments. I found the language stilted and abrupt. Not natural at all.

Absolutely totally debauched hedeonistic sexual pleasuring of pure sex crazy cunts, wonderful totally sucked up fucked up orgy, oh what would I givev to join this situation, fucking and sucking my brains out every day/night. Just love to get drunk on cunt juice, the more I get the more I want. Oh bring it on. Cunt Struck muff diving sex maniac, Lancs UK

Now I'm aroused! Liking your stories. Keep it up. Thanks.

I would like to fuck my daughter sometimes she rubs against me but I am afraid I will not stop

But reading it reminds me of reading "Fun with Dick and Jane"