All Comments on 'News Action Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Good Work

Nice job

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wife?

You don't have a clue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Fiance Wife - which is it

Fiance in chapter one - then wife in two - was she there for the marriage during his ride home? Or was there a stand-in?

Oh, never mind it fits right in with the story of the new(?) wife encouraging him to fuck his new blowjob queen the first day at work. Gee, this makes more sense all the time?

Perhaps back to reading or read what you write with both hands before publication.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
News flash - Hot rod has no conscience!!!

Great story, ignore the whiners and write some more!!!

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