All Comments on 'Next to You'

Yes. Make it an alnighter. Her hubby is drinking with his buddies and won't miss her. Maybe they can develop an ongoing affair to the point that she even gets preggie with you.

This was one great story. Got me wanting to go to an all night party. Keep up the good work.

Enjoyable read but I kept wondering just when Carl would walk in.

And I don't think CArl will forget about her for long let alone all night!

Everybody should have a good friend like Andy.

Liked the story.

Could of been a good story. However, the author can only ridicule the husband. That's sick.

yeah, the story is kind of ...eh. but not because of the issues with the husband. i will never understand why you idiots who clearly don't like reading about cheating wives read these stories anyway, and then you comment and give a poor rating simply based on that! anyway a mediocre rating for a mediocre story

<p>Where is it written that one can read a story only if they like the subject matter? Personally, I like reading stories about humiliating husbands and slut wives just so I can make comments. It's my considered opinion writers are writing from their souls, and the depths of any depraved psychiatric disorders from which they may be suffering.</p>

<p>Surely you understand when I point out the pathetic nature of the characters and action they’ve created in their “story,” I’m showing them their sickness isn’t attractive, it isn’t erotic, and it isn’t literature. Heck, I’m doing a public service here, so stop trying to censor free speech, okay? Besides, it’s not like you can enforce your brand of censorship anyway.</p>

<p>LOL</p>

<p>Ron123XYZ@foreveranonymous.naturally</p>

Thanks for taking on another intolerant poster of the dubious genre of: “And what’s with all the (expletives) who…(More expletives)”

Ron, you're kind of hinting that you're going to find the same flaws in these stories regardless of how well they're written; that being the case, how constructive are your comments? Noone's saying that you can't, just that it's somewhat foolish. You aren't providing a public service, as you say, so much as harassing writers because of your distaste for their preferred genre and their "depraved psychiatric disorders". You're not showing anybody anything but your own closed-mindedness. I mean whatever, do what you like, you know, but your comments only carry enough weight to annoy the people who actually like to read these stories.

<br><br>And incidentally, the story was written kind of sloppily in parts, but overall not bad.