by hypnopup
I love how you gave a good backstory, and focused a lot on drawing out the hypnosis and romance scenes, rather then just rushing through and making it 75% sex descriptions. Great job! :D
I watched a stage hypnotist in California. He hypnotized 6-8 people at one time on stage. It was unbelievable. He had all of the people under his complete control. He told one girl that his microphone was his cock...and she grabbed it and tried to suck it. Her boyfriend or husband got up and left before she could be brought out of her trance. There should be a follow up story to this one.