All Comments on 'No Jimmy, That's Incest! Pt. 01'

Love the build-up and cant wait for the next chapters!

can't wait to read more.

I agree that the grammer and spelling could use a little bit of work but, it's still a good story content-wise. Please continue to write but maybe get an editor from the site. People will do it for free around here.

Some of you critics need a reality check. Sure there were a few grammar errors. But this is an erotic story site, not a writers critique forum. Go some place else with your nitpicky shit. This story was fucking hot and certainly got my cock hard and throbbing. Literotica is about the CONTENT, amd not necessarily needing to nail ALL the grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc.

Go to a pure writer's forum if you're that anal...you'll find plenty of company.

The story was great but your writing can still be improved...

fucking every guy she meets is a slut

This is a great start to a great series. The mother is not a slut. She's a woman with strong needs between her legs. When her boy Jimmy starts soothing those needs with his big stiff cock, mom'll calm down and give her cunt to her boy alone.

I see a part 1 and a part 3, where is part 2?

WTF PART 2 ???

You went from chapter four directly to chapter eight. Chapters five six and seven are missing. I know they have to be in the missing Pt. 02 so where the heck is it?

What the hell happened to part 2????

NO Part #2

What an ahole