All Comments on 'No Strings Attached Ch. 02'

Didn't like story but thats O.K. cause it was written so badly I couldn't finish it. No thanks.

I like this, but the switch from third person to first person POV is confusing. I don't think it adds anything and it is kind of abrupt. It's an interesting relationship the two of them have. I'm curious to see where it may go.

I loved the story from the beginning. However when you made the changed of POV I didn't care for it. But please continue writing I would love to see where their relationship ends.

I liked the story. I'm not sure where its going yet but thats fine. For it to be NSA she seems to be getting pretty attached. I don't agree that it was written poorly. I do think it was very descriptive in some parts and I like that. I say send us the next one

Criticism is supposed to be 'constructive' and when it comes out mean spirited then you just have to ask yourself, 'why is that person hating?'

The change of tense is the only thing that I would change. I assumed it was just an accident, so I put it out of my mind and was able to continue the story and enjoy it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to what comes next from you.

Loved it. Hope you continue!!!!!

That u update cause I really love this story

Love it.

I withhold any minor criticism. The five stars speak for me.

this is so good...