by Ashson
A very nice vignette. Your economical prose has told us a lot about the MC and a lot about Amanda that is left unstated. 5*
You write really well over such a delicate passage of life, would that all boy/girl couplings have such a happy ending!
I'd guess that while he was a Virginia, she certainly wasn't... she had a condom, was on the pill, and very casually wanted to clean up before they finished in the park...
Nice story of a male being deflowered, and yet not too fantastic to be believed.
I agree completely with the foregoing comments - and I am particularly impressed that the author of the first comment is also the author of a large number of top stories posted on literotica -