by firstkiss
All right, I give. I won't lie, I was annoyed that the story moved so quickly from Lilly and Adam to one of her girlfriends. I decided to read on only because I was still intrigued by Adam and wanted to know more about him. But now? Now I'm thinking I like Joe. Well played.
Rhiannon is like an older, maybe more bitter version of me. Her height and weight is the same, her attitude towards things are the same. some other things that i can't remember are. It's freaky haha.<br /><br />I loved the Adam and Lilly story, and this one is just as good :). Well done!
Sorry. I loved Lilly and Adam's story, but these character just aren't doing anything for me. They both seem kinda flat and stereotypical, and I don't really care what happens to either of them. The story is less interesting than last time too. The girl getting pregnant with the one night stand and then falling for the father has been done to death.
you're an awesome writer, this story is going along fabulously, etc. my only problem is that I don't understand the joke in the story. "why argue with something you can't change?" i didn't get it - and if someone did please explain it to me!
first kiss, you're awesome, write more please!
Firstkiss,
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You have delivered another winner. Thank you, again, for sharing your stories with us. As always, I'm already dying for another chapter.
The chapter was great!!!! and HOTT!!! Gahhh i love Joe... i thought he was kinda a jerk in Lily's story.... but not anymore!! Update soon!!! and is there going to be any updates on Writer's Block anytime soon?
I think I'm just going to end up reiterating what everyone else has said: you have fabulous plots, you write fabulously, you craft fabulous characters. Oh and line me up with all the other women that want their own Joe! I am tres jealous of you for having your very own! :) That said loved this chapter and cannot wait to see where Rhiannon and Joe (as well as Lily, Adam, etc.) go from here! Things seem to be spicing up! Thanks for writing! XX
I adore your stories and get drawn into the world you've spun but just this once, all I could think was how incredibly lucky you are to have your own real life joe!!
Your stories and writing are so layered with emotion and reality. You've pulled us right into the moment with Rhi and Joe. (R)
I have to agree with the concensus of the women. "I want a "Joe" too!!! I don't care if he calls himself Mike, Ken, or Andre`.
I feel like the old Jewish woman in the resturant watching Meg Ryan and Billy Crystal in the scene from "When Harry met Sally". When the waitress asks the Older woman what she wants, she replies "I'll have what she's having!!"...LOLOLOL
"First Kiss" believe that you have a gift! Take up writing full time...PLEASE
Shell
I think I like Joe and Rhiannon better than Adam and Lily. Nice work!
Amazing chapter once again! You should give up your day job and become a full time romance writer!!! Can't wait for the next part!
Your female admirers seem to have their own
"Joe" or to be wanting one. You make this male wish that he had been that sort of completely honest lover for each of his "significant" others! You know that I believe you to be among the very best writiers on this site.
I love how this is all working out. I wish I could find my own Joe. lol It seems that all the woman here want one.
I just wanna know where I can get a Joe.... Great story.
Suprisingly enough...I have my own Joe...and your Joe is so much like him...I really do love this story
that was awesome... I love you and your writing... and I'm so jealous :(... I thought I wanted an Adam because of your other story but now I want a Joe! lol... keep up the great work.
Thank you a million times over for sharing your stories with us....love it....please keep writing....we need more....