All Comments on 'Nothing Between Us'

Best I've read recently. So realistic and maturely written, beautiful imagery and I love how you actually took time to develop the characters. Amazing, just amazing. Please keep up the excellent work!

This is one of the best stories, any category, on Literotica. The characters are real, the sex is real, the friendship and romance is real. It is very touching and sweet, and very, very hot.

This is the best story I've read on literotica, in any category. Just fantastic.

The best Literotica story, period.

It made me cry it was so sweet ... and hot.

Thank you for all that it took to write this.

May all of your sexual liaisons be as special

as this story.

Me.S.

One of the few stories that I could relate to...most of these are just full out raunchy sex stories designed specifically for erotic interest. There are really only two that I read where the story was just as (if not more) important than the sex...this was one of them. I felt like I was reading something from my own life...

this is the best story i've read on Literotica. Hell, this is the best story about anything ive read in the past several months.

Incredible doesn't cut it. Not only is it a beautifully written piece, but the story is incredible. It's so much like my life story that it's frightening. I don't know what else to say. It hits home. Thanks.

Porn for people on dial-up

Perfect, actually made me cry; when I have my first time, that's exactly how I'd like it to be. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this.

Absolutely fantastic! hope my first time will be as good as this!

Intellegently and passionately written. You are a master with words. Best story I've ever read and re-read and re-read...

Very well thought out, very well written. Just very sweet and so entertaining...The best story I've read on the site thus far! Don't stop writing!

Thank you for submitting this story.

Why do I need to add to what has already been said? What a story! What writing! Thanks for placing this gem amongst what can sometimes be tedious bonking!

I was thinking of submitting a story myself, but why bother when this one is here?

Best erotic anything I have read in my entire life. Heartfelt and brilliant. You should be very proud.

Please, don't write more of this, i've got to learn for my exams!!

The way you described it in the beginning made me think that it might not be your best work, and if it's not I would love to read more. This was one of the best I've read so far. I might choose this sight to get the stories from.

So many stories on this site are about sex as recreation or even an animal act. This one is the only one I've come across that shows it for what it should be: a beautiful and powerful way of showing love for someone. You did not cheapen it. Thank you.

Reminds me of my first time; reminds me of why I read rather than watching. I really don't like the way so much erotica is essentially meaningless. Good show. A+.

Definetly one of the best first time stories out there. Other than a few minor issues I have with it, it's superb.<br><br>☼ JD

Any chance you might be able to write a sequel? I'd love more of Thuy and Jake's idle chit-chat.

Weldone- a nice, honest and exciting story!

I loved the story, it was really touching. Do you have anymore material?

A very good story, sensitively written, with really nice characterisation. Like all good stories, yhe lead in and sex weren't seperate - they worked beautifully together. I know a sequel would be appreciated - but only if you needed to write it! In other words, let the characters dictate the story. If there is a sequel demanding to be written, then go for it. Thank you for taking the time to write this!

I thought it was so sweet, and it was kind of awkward/funny like my first time, so it brought back nice memories. ^.^

Another?

That's the first time I've read one that was actually realistic. And so far, it's the only time. Brilliant.

Good Job, Well Done, Bravo, Moooore please.

Ah, that my life had turned out that way!

I hope some folks can relate.

Beautiful story,

Xavier

It was so good, I'm practically speechless! Especially memorable was the part where he tasted her for the first time and she covered her face with the pillow. That happened to me with a beautiful Oriental girl, and I cherish that moment time and time again. Thanks for a great story!

It's wonderful, except for one thing.

The hymen is NOT inside the vagina. It's outside, at the entrance. I know that erotica writers from time immemorial have been describing heroes pushing a ways into the heroines and then encountering the hymen, but it's complete and utter bollocks. It's physically impossible. And it throws any reader who happens to be familiar with anatomy right out of the story. Please stop.

Very erotic story! The characters where way more realistic than anything I ever read. They realy responded to eachother and it certainly brought up some great memories. Thanks for submitting it and I hope you will whrite more storries soon.

This story kicked ass because 1 it was well written and two something similar happened to me.... well done

I laughed, I cried, I smiled, my heart beat fast...

Wonderful story!

hav never bothered to coment befor but this one made me want to hack into the voting program so i could vote 10 or 11 5 ain't enough

This author has a tremendous talent for dialogue, better than what you read in most best-selling novels. The characters' words and thoughts are so natural yet clever that you are pulled into the story as though you are part of it. Excellent work.

That was the most touching, well written story I've ever read on this site. Congrats and keep it up!

Simply beautiful...

This story made me forget all around me while reading. Drawn into the emotions of the characters. I laughed, cried, felt along with them.

Amazing work, please, PLEASE keep it up!

That was the best story that I've read in a long time. I almost felt like the character in the story, and you are extremely romantic as well. Very, very excellent job! Your partner is lucky! :) Thank you for the story.

that was inarguably THE best story ive ever read it was so, you got it, everything, it made me laugh and tbh at some points i was so close to cumming myself with no need to touch anything, that ending, oh it was so lovely and funny. write proffesionally i swear you'd be huge unless you do already, i wouldnt be surprised

I have never read a story this deep and meaningful in my entire life. You have an amazing talent for writing and I really hope to read more of your work in the future.

Wow! That was hands down the best experience I have ever known. I hope my first time is as tender as that.

I am so excited to see the rest of your stories!

Best story I have read on this site! Thanks!!!

here in Lit's archives but sometimes it is hard to locate them.... <p>

this one is a simple story, with a simple plot, but it is so well told --- as a story --- that you could almost see, feel, and touch the characters lives. <p>

there are very few, if any, stories here in Lit that would surpass this little one in being a great little piece of literature, in any genre. i've read more heartfelt stories here before --- especially of the tragic kind --- but this one is so well told, so simple, it is almost sublime...

it is the most wonderful story i have read here....

This is the first real "love" story I have read on Literotica so far; I sincerely doubt I'll find one so cleverly written again (unless you write it). Tenderness mixed with humour, awakening love and a beautiful first-time sexual experience...incredible! Thank you.

I have been reading many a story here for more years than i can count, and i must say you wrote a most excellent story.

Usually i dont go for longer stories, but you had me waiting for each page. Its currently 5:30 in the morning, but i just couldnt stop untill i finished. Awesome work. Very well done.

"'Not too deep," Thuy said taking the pillow from her face. "Remember, it's not broken."

"Broken?"

"Hymen."

I looked down expecting to see some sort of film across her but couldn't. "Should I be able to see so I don't break?"

"Don't think so. It's inside.'"

NO, IT ISN'T INSIDE. The hymen is at the entrance of the vagina - look it up on Google,if you don't believe me

Don't guys know anything? Answer: no, they don't

Please don't write 1st time stories if you don't even know where the hymen is located! It's at the entrance not inside the vagina! Talk about ruining a story!

This story was outstanding. You have a great gift for story telling. You had the tendernes and the love and it showed through. This story wasn' just sex, it REALLY was about love!

... amazing ...

This was, without a doubt, the best story I've read on this site... and I've been visiting it for 7 years.

Great job.

And to the naysayers below about the hymen... it was written in the characters' perspective - they may not have been fully aware of the nature of the hymen. I know I wasn't aware of the nature of mine, and infact, I did manage to finger myself prior to sex, and it felt like about an inch of penis went in before it got to my hymen the first time I had intercourse. So I wouldn't get so uppity about it, honestly.

this is like one of the ideal first times. a perfect consummation between two best friends of opposite sex, who grew up together but never realizing, until one fateful day, that they themselves were "the one" for each other. i'd say this story was more romantic/dramatic than erotic. felt like i just came out of a movie theater after reading this, it was THAT good. well done.

Your story had everything a love story should have. Don't pay any attention to those morons who think they're gynocologists. That cherry can be deeep or shallow. You did good.

Of course this story made me horny.

I'm so impressed that it also made me choked up. I was quite moved. It's nice to read some erotica that had emotional weight to it, yes even for a guy. The characters are actually believable.

This is probably my new favorite Lit story.

Please keep up the great work.

The best read yet on this site. So realistic emotionally

Reminded me very much of my first time. You nailed it on the emotional level, good realistic dialogue, completely drew me in. I hope to see a lot more of your writing here.

Pure awesome. Writing was simply graceful--characters, plot, overall storyline was wonderful. The emotion attached to it was simply amazing. Was sad when it ended, wanted more and more! That's how great the story was.

That was so beautiful Omigod seriously, their love was so innocent you can't help but fall in love with them, I know its a story but I'm jealous of Thuy lol

When I found Lit, I thought I would find beautiful writing, not that "Fuck Me Now! Fuck Me Hard!" stuff you read other places. I have finally found it. I will write for Lit, but I can only hope to come close to the feelings this piece has captured. This is the most real piece of erotic literature I have yet read. I hope some day someone thinks of my work as they think of this. I'm astounded. And wet.

Dammit, you made me cry. lol. Your writing is so realistic..this story is crafted like a piece of artwork. You were right, their relationship laid the foundation for the sexual experience. I am really envious of Thuy and Jake's relationship. It's something i have wanted all my life. You've captured the very ESSENCE of friendship-turned-love and I can't appreciate this story anymore than I already do. Bravo!

Fantastic work. i loved it. very close to real... something that can really happen.

you are a master story teller :)

This was such a sweet and excellent story. You're right, it was all so worth the wait. The foundation of their relationship was excellently displayed, and the sex was hot! I did think that some of the dialogue was a little cheesy, but over all, very well done!

Worth reading over and over again, I've sent it to tons of my friends. Thanks.

sweet and hot. great characters.

quite simply the best lit I've ever read in this site (and the only that i've felt was worthy reviewing so far) bravo! fantastic writing and incredibly believable characters. I love how real it was, with the mention of past occurances, minor characters, and the wit! I really enjoyed seeing their playful, youthful, and flirty banter of young love and first times. if I could change anything...I wouldn't change a thing! this story is what I had been searching for here, and I'm glad that your work is here. Also helped to remind me why I'm still a virgin at nearly 19, to wait for that special someone that couldn't possibly make me regret it. I can only hope I'm as lucky as Thuy and Jake! Thanks a lot for that, truly. You have done a fabulous work with this masterpiece! a true talent you have, hope all the best and perhaps you might even become (be) an acomplished writer in the future (now)? :)

Wonderfully written and romantic! It's also realistic how they both didn't know what to do but went with what felt right. The dialogue between them was both charming and funny. You did an amazing job of portraying the emotions of the whole experience. Thanks so much for writing this story! I hope you continue to write and share your stories with us!

I've been reading stories from Literotica for many, many years.

This is far and away the best story I've had the pleasure of reading.

Thank you

So worth the time!

My favorite in your story was, "If I've got you, why would I ever want to think of someone else?". That line in a different story would look cheesy. In your story, that line is PERFECT.

Made me want to be Jacob, in this story. Powerful, simply Powerful wrighting. I'm going to read some of your other submissions, I doubt i'll be disappointed by any of them. PLEASE KEEP POSTING.

That was so amazing ... reminds me of my own first time with the biggest love ever ... thank you. Thank you for making me feel like I do right now ...

Such realistic characters. Beautiful. Fantastic. Keep up the exceptional work!

i loved reading it! definitely worth it!

Definitely worth the read. Your literary imaging made my visual imaging work overtime. Contextually brilliant and totally believable characters and storyline. I am in awe, dear Author!

Great dialogue and great us of dialogue to get the story started. A solid read. Needs a little more of an ending.

I have a tear rolling down my eye. I hope my first time is similar to this story :) You are an excellent writer, I didnt even mind the build up to the erotic part of it.

What a beautiful story! Managed to make me tear up and aroused in the same breath. Keep doing what you do.

Absolutely amazing.

Second best story I've ever read on literotica, ever.

Thanks for making the effort to write this story.

I hope you continue writing more.

Solid. simply solid. If you don't write for real, you should.

Best story on literotica by a mile! Overpowering emotion aswell as arousal. Keep up the good work!!!

This was a beaut: the build-up was just right

This was one of the best stories i've read on literotica! incredible work. Loved the backround knowledge and the build up. great character develpoment. keep up the great work!

Amazing. I loved reading it and I loved how the words painted such a picture in my mind. Please become a professional writer, for the better of the writing community.

Absolutley loved it! One of the best stories on literotica.

Thank you for writing this. Keep it up!

If that happened to me, I would not be able to stop smiling for several years. I'd have to get therapy.

I believed every word, it was like I was there. Great story I loved it..

I loved this story. Thank you for writing it.

loved wat the dad says at the ending. rofl

made me think of the first I had sex too . Buying condums .

loved what the dad says at the ending also

Just loved it.

Its beyond just sex. its all about feelings and emotions..

this is far too great and is beyond erotica. its love..

I knew her (now my wife) for about 6 yrs before we did it. I just went back into those days.... sometimes it just takes too long to realize...

best erotic story i've read. good work.

My boy and I have been dating for about a year and a half now, and we have known each other for almost 8 years altogether. I would say we had a similar kind of relationship as you and Thuy. Except as extremely platonic online buddies, me in central Indiana, him in central Ohio. I think in the back of our minds we always secretly desired each other throughout whatever it was we had over AIM. Anyway, I decided we needed to meet each other in August of 2007. So I drove over and spent the weekend. It was straight out of a movie. We fell madly in love the very first night, on the "mountain" (the giagantic hill in the center of town in the public park) at the exact same moment, sitting in silence underneath the stars and a meteor shower we had no clue was going to happen. Things got a little crazy when we went back to his friend's basement where I was staying for the weekend.

I ended up moving here 2 months later to be with him and continue our relationship. We are still not living together as we try to live our lives simply, and following Jesus, trusting God. And believe firmly in His teachings. So we are waiting until we're married. I did take his virginity that first night though, but we haven't since then. (which, if you're confused, hmmm she was just talking about God and posting a comment on a story she read about on Literotica? what?) well that's why I'm here. We can't, but I've still got to take care of buisness!!!

Reading your story really brought back all the great things I had forgotten about from the earlier parts of our relationship when everything was new and there was so much to discover, it was so overwhelming!!

I adore it, this was written well and very beautifully, very raw and honest but tender and real at the same time.

It makes me wish my purity ring was a wedding band instead...

I am pretty sure if he were here with me right now in bed, I would not be able to walk tomorrow morning.

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story was simply amazing.

It brings two thoughts to mind...the awkwardness of my first time with my first love...

...and the feelings I have but may never admit to the woman I call my best friend.

Excellent. Brought back memories af my own teenage fumblings, longer ago than I care to tell you!

Nice, detailed, and very very sexy. Keep on writing, please!

Such a sweet and lovely way to spin a story around the first time.

just loved it.

Amazing well written, a compelling dialogue, and touches on

so many different moments of the real world that the couple share with us. Thanks for giving us this work of art.

that was good, and suprisingly funny!