All Comments on 'Now Starring Ch. 04'

I see you just submitted this chapter. Sorry, got the date wrong, I thought this was submitted on the 25th and was surprised at the lack of comments at such a great addition to the series. Anyway, like I said, good job and can't wait for more.... : )

I love this story, great character and plot. Waiting impatiently for the next installment. hope it will be much longer too.

"What are you on?"

"I'm on the sofa."

Love him to bits. Poor little thing, David is even bringing out my maternal instincts but I still feel we have not quite got to the bottom of him yet. (no pun intended)

So much infidelity, heartbreaking behaviors. Vartan is a douchebag and Sonja broke David and sold herself to a rich baby daddy. Phil is a sleeve. Who knows what up with John and David - neither is being entirely upfront and honest with the other so who knows if they’ll hurt each other more?