All Comments on 'Nude Beach Wings'

by passionpit20

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great First Story.... Give Us More!

Title says it all. I love that the woman in your story is the instigator but doesn't do it in a brazen manner. Very sexy!

don87654don87654over 14 years ago
A good start....

This story is a bit long, but it is a good start for a nude beach orgy, complete with an unidentified pregnancy from a dick not fully known.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Hot story!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice start, but it needs work.

Your phrasing doesn't flow well and often forces a hard stop to re-read and try to understand it. I really doubt 'she slid INTO him' or 'thrust INTO him'

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very very HOT!!

Let's see the next one, come on!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good, but..

Very nice start, especially for first time ...would have been a five but needs to be continued in order to get a five star. Looking for more.. Thanks.

MerchantbankerMerchantbanker11 months ago

Excellent. One of my favourite fantasies described so well. Left me nice and hard!

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