by BlueFish11
This, indeed, was a very strange story. Didn't exactly explain what happened and there was nothing to really base a guess upon. Story needs some basis in fact and could use some greater explanation.
inventive and mysterious. Not entirely successful in its conclusion.
I thoroughly enjoyed the story until the punch line was delivered. I just couldn't see this happening. Great writing up until that point.
I wished there wasa little more humour in the loving wives section. Keepit up.
If you seriously need "more explanation" and "some basis in fact", you have absolutely no imagination at all. Read another porn story instead. Thanks, BlueFish, for a great story.
VERY inventive. Leave the reader imagining what happened - let the mind wander. One can only imagine where that Xmas ball ended up! ;) Hummm, did muscular contractions break the delicate glass????
Keep up the interesting prose...
Oh, and nevermind the nay-sayers who lack imagination.
Ball was but was the last Ben-Wa balls? that I was not really sure about.
Will be the husband after the wife puts the ben wa balls up his ass.
I actually think I understood the ending! Thanks Blue, for sharing this gem!
it was a great read. Only one problem wives should not lie to their husbands, or promise things they cant deliver, she needs to beat the crap out of him, but we will wait until he is asleep of course.
The vagina isn't a good place for a Christmas tree bauble they are often made of very thin and delicate glass and are easily broken. A good job she was encouraged to stay still, the ER staff are used retrieving foreign objects from various orifices, it would have been very painful if it had broken, the Dr would just stretch vagina and it would roll out
.A very amusing Christmas story.
5 stars.
An unusual, but interesting story from the LW vault. Lot of good writing through the years available for us to find.
Oh my god, that is some fragile glass in there. Lol, and yet it is still funny. Nice change of pace.