All Comments on 'O/D Productions Proudly Presents... Ch. 02'

by JordonLynn

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Nice work

The first chapter blew me away, JJL has a real talent for the interracial stuff (other sotries are awesome too).

JL - Keep on it. I really look forward to the next chapters.

Keep t up.

Rob

ktsemaktsemaabout 20 years ago
awesome

excellent story line, character development

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Shakespeare is hardening in his grave

"O/D Productions": are you actually going to venture a libidinous retelling of the Othello story? Or at least have parallels? If so, who will turn out to be Iago to Link and Dot's Othello and Desdemona? Shakespeare, a randy bi-sexual himself, would approve. Bardolators (and just plain horny folks) beg for more of the story.

demonmangademonmangaalmost 13 years ago
This is a new twist in storymaking

It's interesting that Dot is not being targeted as a sex object, not even by Quentin nor Lincoln in this porn world called the compound.

Very lovely idea indeed.

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