All Comments on 'Obsession Ch. 02'

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love4811love4811about 14 years ago
As always thank you.

I, we have been waiting for another chapter for a while and you did not disappoint. I love the brothers.

PennLadyPennLadyabout 14 years ago
Good to see more

Just wanted to say nice job. :) I'm a little confused with all the K names, but I'll just make a chart. ;) Looking forward to more.

theonlinestalkertheonlinestalkerabout 14 years ago
FINALLY!!!!

You have no idea how "obsessed" i am with your stories. please please please don't wait too long to post the next chapter.

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenabout 14 years ago
Okay, you've got to get the next chapter out.

I just have to know what about her is so evil that would cause him to leave her. Excellent storytelling. You've got me hooked.

jadeanise21jadeanise21about 14 years ago
good work

i love your stories and i really liked this chapter. i really hope that the next chapter is out really soon

goood work

i love it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
hrm...

I don't think she's entirely human. The way her smell changed to him when they were talking to Mindy. Just my opinion. Thanks for the update.

honeybreehoneybreeabout 14 years ago
Great Update

However, I' am going to need you to do a flow chart of all the siblings names...lol. I was getting confused with the brothers and the sisters but I' am so HAPPY you updated!!! I was waiting for an update of this story. I love Nat and Kyan together, but something about nat doesn't add up she seem to be a bit supernatural herself! And thank you for showing Mindy! I thought she would come off as a bad character but in fact she is not, she just seem a bit self absorbed and conflicted with being a mother and living her life. I wish you do a back story on Nat and Mindy's friendship because they seem so odd to be each other BFF but they are not! Can't wait for chapter 3

spearman1spearman1about 14 years ago
Holy Crap!!!

That was an awesome chapter!! I'm loving the secret your putting in there and the little twist that keep happening. Great job!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Damn

Wish Kyan scared/beat the living crap out of that wicked James, that's for sure. Am very curious about this past that she's so afraid of revealing but I doubt it's so bad that Kyan would be running away from her considering how madly in love he seems to be. Then he'd just be an outright fool if he did. Pop out the next chapter 'cause the babies are coming!

luv_romanceluv_romanceabout 14 years ago
whoa

what a chapter! write fast pls.... :) i can't wait for the secret to come out. :)

EdwarusEdwarusabout 14 years ago
More!!!

cant wait to read more about them and great series

willing2explorewilling2exploreabout 14 years ago
Babies, DCF and Ex's

Man this chapter had a lot going on!!!! I am so glad that the babies are coming and i hope that they are all ok. So I am having serious mixed feelings about Mindy as of right now. I am also looking forward to finding out what this closely held past. thanks for the update and i cant wait for the next one...Hope it comes soon.

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 14 years ago
Still love this couple!

I hope you don't make us wait quite so long for chapter 3. Looking forward to mroe!

blonde1pspblonde1pspabout 14 years ago
WOW

I just LOVE Kyan's story, it's really interesting lots of twists, I can't wait for the next chapter, i hope it's SOON!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
DON'T MAKE YOUR ADORING PUBLIC WAIT TOO LONG!!!

For the next chapter! This is awesome. This is going to be as hot as the rest-I just feel it! Keep up the great work.

lostchickenlostchickenabout 14 years ago
Hmmmm

Okay so totally loving this one by the way! Just finished reading Kiran's stories and decided to switch to this one.... cant wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
So Loving This Story

Sorry I haven't posted sooner, but I am loving this story. After reading New Found Love I just had to read more of your creations. Great Job!!!

I am LITERALLY checking this site 2 to 3 times per day for updates. PLEASE, please, please update soon!!!!

Sammy1on1Sammy1on1about 14 years ago
Loved this Update

This was an awesome update, I hope that you are able to put the next chapter up soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I don't like your stories!!

I love them.

I read Candice and Peter story and I was hooked.

I love the Channing Men.

Please don't hold back on us.

Just keep posting those long, long, chapters.

Please update soon.

sw33tlovesw33tloveabout 14 years ago
WRITE MORE!!

All your series are fantastic and i can read them over and over again. Keep it going!

mrskelleymrskelleyabout 14 years ago
Favorite...

You are one of mine. I love your stories. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Lioness_QueenLioness_Queenabout 14 years ago
Loved it

oh my, wow i'm speechless. i can only guess what her secret is ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
More More More

Please continue this story... dying to hear more about the Channing clan and Kyan/Natalie in particular! Your style of writing makes it easy to read - everything flows nicely and the characters are awesome! thx for sharing your talent with us.

sweetfatimasweetfatimaabout 14 years ago
please please stop teasing us

I serious i cant wait for you to update.That kiss alone was consuming and hott!!!!

Cinndney25Cinndney25about 14 years ago

Please tell mwe there is more and soon

trinisamplertrinisamplerabout 14 years ago
so can't wait

in particular i can't wait to see what's up with natalie.........is she a were or something????...arrgh the suspense is killing me!!...please post more soon!!

sweetfatimasweetfatimaabout 14 years ago
ok!!!im getting crazy!!

Im checking like everyday!!!!! please update i love your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Please

Hurry back! This getting good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Please!Please!Please!

Pretty please just keep on writing! PLEASE!

nieniernienieralmost 14 years ago
Please Continue!!

I am so loving this story it is the bomb! Please pretty pretty please continue it. I wonder what deep dark secret Nat has to tell.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
predictions

without reading 3 or 4 i predict that nat is a werewolf, and thus already like 3/4 immortal if not a w-w then a weretiger or some such and if not a were then a vamp of a different clan

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
as did i

i was thinkimg tshe was a were a some type but now with the strip club leaning to maybe a hooker or call girl

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
He/she was right

Lmfao annonymous was right she is a werewolf

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

This is turning out to be bigger than I thought and James is a sick douche for everything he's done this chapter..would've nut checked him and left him writhing on the lawn

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Thank you!!

It is a cold Valentine Nite! And I'm all alone and stumbled across your story and all I can say is Bravo!!! Thank you for a great read !!

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