All Comments on 'Off the Bus Ch. 03'

AGAIN!!!!!!! OK NOW I AM WAITING ON CHAPTER 4, COME ON LALA WE NEED IT NOW :)

I stopped reading from the site because all the stories were sounding the same, but you brought me back!

You are an awesome writer, and your stories are enjoyable. Keep up the good writing.

Do you have a blog with your stories? If so, please put it in your biography.

can't wait for part 4!

Have you ever thought of writing for a publisher? Really like what you write.

You really should write professionally I've never read an interracial story as hot as yours. Please continue the good work.

this story got me really hot'n'bothered.... i really like it

Please continue. I cant wait to see how this story unfolds.

that was smoking hot! Wild

Man that was sexy hot. I love the interaction between Jolie and David. Very sensuous story with very likeable characters. Keep up the wonderful stories and I'll keep reading them. Have you considered getting your worked printed....

you should publish your work.

I hope to see more. Actually, have read all your stories and liked them all.

More of this, is what we need=NOW!!

You need to finish this.

Omg please finish this storyyyyy!

Please finish. Really liked their chemistry and the exchanges are funny as hell!!

Please continue David & Jolie's story.

A hook at the beginning of the third chapter. It was a nice twist on her dream. The sex scene was excellent, and Jolie's requesting protection was a great way to delay the orgasms and sleep. I look forward to reading some of your other series, and I liked the short chapters.

Making love to a black woman is are some of my fondest memories thank you for helping me relive them. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.