All Comments on 'Off the Bus Ch. 03'

Making love to a black woman is are some of my fondest memories thank you for helping me relive them. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

A hook at the beginning of the third chapter. It was a nice twist on her dream. The sex scene was excellent, and Jolie's requesting protection was a great way to delay the orgasms and sleep. I look forward to reading some of your other series, and I liked the short chapters.

Please continue David & Jolie's story.

Please finish. Really liked their chemistry and the exchanges are funny as hell!!

Omg please finish this storyyyyy!

You need to finish this.

More of this, is what we need=NOW!!

I hope to see more. Actually, have read all your stories and liked them all.

you should publish your work.

Man that was sexy hot. I love the interaction between Jolie and David. Very sensuous story with very likeable characters. Keep up the wonderful stories and I'll keep reading them. Have you considered getting your worked printed....

that was smoking hot! Wild

Please continue. I cant wait to see how this story unfolds.

this story got me really hot'n'bothered.... i really like it

You really should write professionally I've never read an interracial story as hot as yours. Please continue the good work.

Have you ever thought of writing for a publisher? Really like what you write.

can't wait for part 4!

I stopped reading from the site because all the stories were sounding the same, but you brought me back!

You are an awesome writer, and your stories are enjoyable. Keep up the good writing.

Do you have a blog with your stories? If so, please put it in your biography.

AGAIN!!!!!!! OK NOW I AM WAITING ON CHAPTER 4, COME ON LALA WE NEED IT NOW :)