All Comments on 'Office Control Ch. 02'

by Archangel34

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
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Rather non-sensical!!!! Better luck next time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Great fantasy

Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
More nitpicking

"She collected them in her hand and discretely put it in her drawer."

"Them" is correctly plural (for panties) but "they" suddenly become a single "it".

Take more care with your grammar - there are several examples of this confusion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I could really see myself there

Loved it. Please write more

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