All Comments on 'Office Hours'

by janevalenz

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AzuldrgonAzuldrgonabout 15 years ago
wonderful teaser

Nice to see the possible ways she could take her seduction. It has been said that the journey sometimes is more pleasurable than the destination. Can't wait to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Climax..

What happened to the rest of the story? There has to be more..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nice.

I like it a lot. Things are often hotter in the imagination then they are in action, and imagining someone's imaginings is plenty hot in this case.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
good start

I like where you're going here. Please release the next portion soon! It's incredibly well written and you capture your main character exquisitely.

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 15 years ago
You definitely have my attention!

Looking forward to see where the story goes.

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