All Comments on 'Office Politics Ch. 02'

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alwayshomealwayshomeover 1 year ago

Great story, looking forward to the rest of it.

RedMockersRedMockersover 1 year ago

Sigh. "The things I'd like to do to you." Best sentence in the whole thing. You're a genius. Part 1 had lots of promise. But this... please hurry and post more!

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 1 year ago

Little bit drawn out in the buildup and the Gabriel you've presented so far should have a last name of Weinstein instead of Hunter. 4*

Aoife_from_UlsterAoife_from_Ulsterover 1 year ago

The background, the build up and anticipation are working very well. I truly am enjoying the slower engagement. Looking forward to more.

RoRo13RoRo13over 1 year ago

That build up tho... Too intense! Feels like I'm watching a sultry series!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I agree with RedMockers "The things I'd like to do to you" is a great line.

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18/1/22 Small update, i have asked for the enslavement of Briseis to be taken down now, this should be happening in the next few days, so i suggest you don't start reading, unless you're prepared to read the thing all in one sitting! Thanks again for all your lovely comments....

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