by karaline
Sigh. "The things I'd like to do to you." Best sentence in the whole thing. You're a genius. Part 1 had lots of promise. But this... please hurry and post more!
Little bit drawn out in the buildup and the Gabriel you've presented so far should have a last name of Weinstein instead of Hunter. 4*
The background, the build up and anticipation are working very well. I truly am enjoying the slower engagement. Looking forward to more.
I agree with RedMockers "The things I'd like to do to you" is a great line.