by alisontanner
very very good! Thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope there will be a 2nd chapter to see how these two progress in their naughtiness! xxx
I really enjoyed reading this and became very aroused! Please do write more - you have a natural talent for it.
I've read this story so many times. I still enjoy it. The dialogue, the changing perspectives, the melding together of two passions, experience helping innocence... all were well done.
Have you considered writing more about these two? Whether you do or not, I think you have some excellent talent. Please keep writing.
I really liked the way that you had the older more experienced woman lust for the younger just out of high school very inexperienced girl. I thought that the way that you got the older women to seduce the younger girl was actually very believable. She took her time and made the younger girl respond to her advances.
If it wasn't a real story it was written quite well.
Thanks for taking time to read my comment
As always. Betsey
I really liked the tempting tease. Hope there will be more.
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As i've said before, I can tell when a story is by a woman because she know the anatomy of a female and here emotional needs..AAAAA+++++
Can someone else take this over from u as u ain’t used this for ages