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dozendozenabout 9 years ago
Great story ...

....just one complaint about grammar. You write "Kathy and I" when you should say "Kathy and me". Sometimes "Kathy and I" is correct as in "Kathy and I went to bed."

but more often than not it should be "Kathy and me" as in "Paul escorted Kathy and me to her room." or "Kathy brought drinks for Lila, Paul and me."

"Kathy and I" is correct when it is the subject of a verb. Any other time it should be "Kathy and me".

I'm sorry to be a pain in the arse (I'm Australian) but it really annoys me.

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