All Comments on '"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned'

best j"ve read

AWESOME loved it, and finally a story filled with love, not a Mother being shared with other men I get tired of those!!! And loved the ending but you should have followed until Patty had her child and Mommy and her had more children!!!!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I thought it was one of the best stories I've read in a long time and like everyone else i think a couple more chapters would be great but great story anyway

Definitely wish there was more to this story

Meh

I want more !!

A well written family lust, incest story. I sort of was thinking mom was going to spank Patty for her lust over Bobby,

then Patty. would give mom a good bum/titty whipping for seducing Bobby, but who knows that can be introduced later. Or in the following chapters!

This was so hot and I couldn’t help but play with myself the whole read. I just wish there was more mom on daughter action and more masturbation

It is a great story I am looking foreward to more stories byScouries

Bravo encode encore

The story left me gasping for breath

I've been on this site for a long time and trust me when I say that this will be another re-read because I like the romance of it; the build up and it wasn't a quickie. You gave it a good ending the only thing I wish that could have been corrected is telling us a little bit more about Patty's baby. Other than that this was definitely a well written story and I'll be re-reading it again.

You are a great writer, very talented.

Lot of good things about this story but the sequencing really threw me off and it seemed to change speeds multiple times.

GREAT STORY LOVEDIT

I’m going to have to give you 5 stars on this one . The build-up was nicely paced and very sensual , finally culminating in an erotic frenzy . Very hot

Would have held more if there was more build-up and foreplay for Patty’s first time. There was so much which could have happened then with both girls in build-up and orgasms. More anticipation, more arousal… just more.

There was no build up of the love making. Not enough foreplay not enough oral, it was more casual sex than lovemaking, a good storyline.

Liked it. Editing was great and storyline was steady. Agreed on the lack of foreplay. Give the sex some body.

oooh dear god what a story. the best i have ever read so beautiful when a mother and a sister both marry there brother unbeliveabley lovely

2nd time i've read this, loved it, I know it might sound crude to some, but wish there was at least one session of mom & daughter making love. 5 star.

the best dont stop

so beautiful a great wonderful meaty story

Such a lovely and very well written incestuous love story, but I hope that at some point he fucks his mummy and his sisters arses, real hard, real dry, real often and starts on them both, real soon...

I loved this story, as it is a really well written incestuous tale of sex between a Mummy, her Daughter and her Son, and I hope that the Son gets round to fucking his Mummy's and his Sisters arses, real hard, real dry, real often and real soon too...

Great story. love brother sister incest.

A great story of real time incest. Love is the foundation of all sex- incest, or non-incest. Fucking own mother, aunt, sisters, daughters are a excellent exciting joy and very orgasmic.

written about 17 years back, and still making 5s !

Short and sweet. Yes, like others have said, it could have used more buildup as well as love and emotion to solidify the bonds. But overall it was a beautiful tale with a lovely ending. That little marriage ceremony they did was icing on the wonderful cake that this story is. So romantic and loving. I would love to see a story like this but instead of it being short, it would be heavily expanded with more details from the characters' lives, their dramas and so on.

Third read & still 🥵 hot!

Bill S.

Great story up until the end . It could of made a second chapter

Seriously good.

Very good story.

Please continue

Love the story 💯

Kept me reading on and on - enjoyably.

For some reason this was a truly captivating and beautiful thing to read

very sweet story...really enjoyed reading each line...congrats.

you sir , are a wordsmith ! [If there is such a word!] . Amazing !!

fab i wished it was me the lucky devil

Beautifully written. Made me envious too.

Ohhh.... It was so intense and hot. The beach kiss between mom son had me cum like crazy.

Still one of my favorite reads, even after 5 times.

Ohhh fuck me I need to be fucked right now pleeease shove your hard cock in Mommy's tight pussy please baby please...I want your cum so far in me it stays dripping out for days...

More please! I feel odd reading incest porn but how u framed it and lil details made it believable and right

Way too rushed.

I like reading incest stories. I really don't like reading incest + polygamy. The story was way too long

One of the all time best

The loss of virginity was so poorly described that I'm disappointed .... it's a shame, the rest was great .

So far it’s been great as a calm family getting along.

244 Jake

Liked it. Could use more descriptive color. An anal session(s) would be a plus.

That was a very hot story! Definitely had me all wound up and kinda jealous!

Thank you for sharing !

I loved this story. Very erotic. Love these guilt free incest tales. 5⭐️

Chapter 2- Bobby continued to fuck his sister Patty and impregnated her nine more times over the next twenty-seven years. Patty used her middle name as her last name, so she and Bobby could get married by an unsuspecting local justice of the peace the day after Patty graduated from the university. Bobby and Patty had five daughters and five sons. Bobby also continued to fuck his mother Chrissie and impregnated her five more times over the next twelve years. Chrissie gave birth to two more daughters and three sons.

I enjoyed this story years ago when I read the first time and just found it agin

Maybe you will return and write more

Thank-you Jim for this storey. It was a seductively sweet storey. The future of their children remains cloudy but you wrote about a close family unit that already had respect and trust in each other. For most couples that takes years of building if the relationship ever survives.