All Comments on '"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned'

I loved it. The seduction was beautiful but I can't help feeling you became bored with or eager to end the story by the last page and rushed through the sex. Still an enjoyable read.

Great story, close to believable, Hope you write more

Thanks for the share. It was very well written and you did a good job of character development.

This is the kind of story I search and search for. It has literally every key element I look for. I mean this as a compliment of the highest order...it reads like some of my story ideas. Please, write more stories like this one.

The children are inbreed's....pele

someone needs to explain such to some of my childhood neighbors. The children developed normally, graduated high school, attended higher education schools, had handsome male and female children of their own, grandchildren, the last I knew. not one was ever a problem medically or emotionally. This is more than one such family I've known during my lifetime and all are fine. Hell, how was it for the bible people to explain not only of Adam and Eve, but Lot and his daughters, Noah and his family, etc. Rulers and other royal familes of Egypt, Rome and other such countries seemed to produce without 15 toes or fingers on either place. Nice and rounded story and fun to read this five star pages.

Love.

This is an incredible story of love

Well done. A perfect example of how love true love knows no boundaries not even those of blood.

That was a very sexy tale and made me very hard

Will enjoy myself now. Thanks

One of the best. made me and my girlfriend cum numerous times

I HAVE JUST JERKED OFF AND IT WAS FANTASTIC FOR ME. I WOULD LOVE TOBE THE YOUNG SON AND BROTHER. I COULD FUCK FOR A LIFETIME.

I HAD A SISTER THAT WANTED ME BUT I WAS TOO FAR AWAY. I STILL THINK ABOUT IT. SHE USED TO SUCK MY DICK WHEN I WAS AYOUNGSTER AND SHE LOVED IT

thankyou for this extremely erotic tale,

Loved it! Keep them cumming!

Awsome story just wished it were me.

How I love mother and son and son and daughter incest love stories

I've read this several times and never get tired of reading it. Were that it be true and that I could be the son/brother. <3

Five stars for this delightful story of lust, love, and beauty. Well done.

What a truly lovely sexual story , I got so excited reading a story with no inhibitions , my cock was hard from beginning to end. Xxxxx

Made me cum it was so good!! You're great!! I'd love to talk with you about other story ideas.... And maybe if you are into it we could do some Internet writing rp? I dunno... You can reach me on Skype at zukonium. I look forward to talking to you... Code word is vampire.... I know weird... But it works... I'll read some of you're other stories and I didn't notice very many mistakes either.

Great story, loved reading it. Made me super horny.

Great story! A must read!

This story is very great reading. I only wish I had pictures to go with at least part of it.

The fantasies in my mind and down to my crotch, with my cock jumping at some of the thoughts expressed and imagined were and are exhilirating. Come and visit me as often as you'ld like.

Congratulations,

Very Well Written!!

Maybe I should mention that it's my cock that makes her vocal. Her moaning and groaning only increases my desire to fuck her even harder. It turns me on so much when she says my name, along with many other things, as she comes.

Very good writing and very very hot, keep writing these hot stories.

Exactly the type of story I love to read. Very well written.

I read every word of it, normallY I miss some out

I pushed my finger inside when I read it... oh my God I was horny a lot... I dont know about mom I definitely need u bro... plz cum inside me, I too want to miss my periods...

Yeah, family fucking is great. Moms should encourage their sons to breed them and it's just sad that there wasn't a husband/dad to fuck and breed Patty

good jacking off story

genius,genius ,genius

Those kids are gonna be so confused about their lives and their gonna get picked on. Not to mention they're inbred. I mean if I'm gonna fuck my own cuzzo I wouldn't try to get preggers because most of u slutz sayin " I wish my hot brother would give me his cum for the baby'" can't even take care of yourselves.

Your story was beautiful, I genuinely loved it.

I really liked this Story, is something wrong with me.

I love the depth and character in your stories, but especially they make me hard as a rock! I always end up playing with myself by the last page. I hope that pleases you! Thank you so much!

iloved it please keep writing it brought a tear to my eye

I fucked my gf at d same time, reading dis story.... U are a magnificient writer

WHAT A GREAT STORY. IT GOT ME HARD SEVERAL TIMES JUST READING THIS GREAT STORY.

Awesome!

This was a nice fairy tale. It was erotic, but it was flawed. I can't help but notice the errors and non sequiturs:

University (university)

fist string of sticky cum (first)

mothers family (mother’s)

when he as fourteen (was)

giving the two women their privacy and he his freedom (him)

b-b-q-ed (bbqed)

he held his streaming hose over the toilet. Felt himself hardening (hardening while peeing HMMM???)

Half way (Halfway)

no ones even (one’s)

took the roach (ONE HIT, NO MATTER HOW BIG, DOES NOT MAKE A JOINT A ROACH)

a half inch long butt (THAT IS A ROACH!!!!)

he lifter her (lifted)

sisters tightening insides (sister’s)

He rode Patty hard this third time (WHEN WAS THE SECOND TIME????)

Then (he) could feel her

he promised his wife (WHEN DID THEY MARRY????)

(He) (-L)(l)oved it

orgasming her need of him (CLUMSILY EXPRESSED)

suns just coming up (sun’s)

As with most of the better authors on this site the writing is top-notch, but the mechanics make a otherwise excellent story seem like a first draft instead. The promise is there, in spades. The fulfillment is not. Get a competent editor and improve the already high quality of your work.

I love this story! Makes me wish I had two women like that...

i'd like to know their doing so far as one

Girls look sexy when they r nude. There4 girls should never wear dress a at any place like school, college, office home and that boy should be allowed to fuck girls as much he likes & enjoy their moms too .

Wonderful story

Too good.....let society get back to hell.....or heaven.......very errotic and thought provoking

Enjoyable and well written, even with the known ending it was truly a terrific read.

This is my absolute favorite kind of story. Thank you for writing this. 5/5

Finally a good story that I can relate to.In your story, son gets mom pregnant and she delivers a baby girl and son is in the process of getting his sister pregnant. This is almost exactly what happened in my case. I gor my mother pregnant two times before my sister realized what was going on between mom and me and wanted in on the action. We got together and sis got pregnant with the first of 4 children with me. Mother also had 4 children with me and we finally stopped cuz 11 children was becoming too many to handle. I have a brother too. Dad was never wise to the situation,

So well written , a true tail of forbidden love capped by the making of a new family

Second time reading the story, is just as great this time.

Wow...couldn't put it down. Great story...hot, constantly, with anticipation.

Great erotic writing from my viewpoint.

Truly enjoyed this story, kept me excited all the way through. Makes me wish I had the same happen to me. I do like orgasms even thought provoked. Read your BIO and hope this finds you well and writing.

Nothing about this story shows it to be worth less than the five stars I rated your romantic endeavors to pull this family even closer together.

I love it have read it a few times

Loved the writing ... Loved the story ... I hope you write some more

just one little thing --- he never poped her chery ... but great story

This is an awesome story. Good sex, of course, but also full of love. Not completely based upon lust, though that is present also. It's good that he made a choice between the girlfriend and his sister and tried his girlfriend's mother before his own mother - and the other woman of course. Though he was only 18 or so, his mother did not figuratively 'rob the cradle' by accepting his love at such a young age. I've read this several times. This family is close and loving even before they became romantically and sexually involved. That is good. One's lover should also be one's best friend. After all, whether lover or best friend you share a whole lot. Why not both at the same time!

great story but you guys should write more about African I live in Nigeria

It's been so long since I read it last that I'd forgotten it mostly, so the enjoyment was fresh again! Really loved the story too! ...usually mom/son stories dont really do anything for me, but once in a while you find one just written so well you cant help but fall in love with it. :). Oh, I think calling her 'mommy' adds a fun, kinky twist of yumminess to it, hehehe!

Thanks for writing for us (or yourself!), as usual!

this was a great story and I think that it would be a great thing to have a follow up on how the family is doing in here new town and how is there life doing know . this Is a good story and great story line to I would give this a score of 10 thanks for sharing your gift with all of us .

A very good story, thank you!

Hahaha lol what the fuck is this, with all the marriage and shit. Like invest is hot and all but having fuckin deformed little babies is gross af

Loved it, simply loved it. I think it was an excellent read.

Nothing but consensual honest love. My sister and I had

that once many years ago.

You have an incredible talent. Love what you write and how you write ti. Please don't 7stop

Keep up the great work I have ever read. Look forward to more episods.

I think what most stories miss is the part after first sex. this story brilliantly covered it. mentioning about the repeated endless fuck sessions and happy fucking forever after make it lustful.

Gee, holiday, summer of fun, lots of nice sex, a given virginity, one very lucky son and brother. Very satisfied mom and sibling. Terrific five stars story. None better.

A little late after the story can out. But a lot early for THIS merry Christmas and a Happy New Year for this author. HoHoHo.

What a beautiful story of love to read as it all ever so slowly developed between each members of the family. I loved the way that they ever so slowly began to experience their sexual loves together. In the real world incest could present problems. but as a story it made sense. Let's have some more. Thank you for also stirring sexual feelings within me. That was also good.

Leo. at bondpleasure1@outlook.com - if you want to reply.

As with all your stories just the best! Should you not now be writing film scripts? Read every one of your stories, in a bit of a withdrawal mode, please post more.

What a great story!

I'm a writer myself. Come check me out if you want:

http://imageteam.org/img-52de33c86e351.html

Thank you!

lucky guy. no mother in law, two wives, a happy life ahead for them all , I wish I was that darn lucky..

You really outdid yourself with this one.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Doesn't seem enough.

Yes, it was a wonderfully absorbing story line and well-written and plotted. I read it through and got a roaring hardon. That's a compliment. Would love to read more stories from you.

Beautiful story, unending love.

The story got a 90 year old hard, but not quite to the cum part.

Good story.... Almost had me joining the three.

A big complement to 'Scouries' that so many woman enjoyed the storey and were turned on by it.

It never degraded females and very little bad language or derogatory terms.

Would liked to have known more about how his girlfriend's mother seduced him.

Love in a family is always strong so it's difficult to see how a sexual relationship kindles.

I never had a sister so can't say if I would have fancied her, but had fantasies about my mother as an adolescent. Mum became masturbatory image along with pictures in 'Lads Mag's' and I can't remember if girls or other mature females were in my fantasies.

It was when Mum had words with me about the 'birds and bee's', saying Dad couldn't, that she said now I was growing into a man I didn't need to hide my sexual awakening about using tissues or spending too much time in the toilet. We were both embarrassed but Mum broke the embarrassment by saying "We only have one toilet!!".

After that it became jovial between Mum and I if we were the only two about and I went to bed early or to my room to study, Mum would say "For one off the wrist" or "With your 5 fingered widow" or "Makes you go blind" or "Your girlfriends best friend" or "I'll change the sheets in the morning". All the old jokes we had heard a thousand times before.

This bought Mum and I closer together so I started doing the actions of masturbating. Mum laughed. Mum started doing the actions back and as we males know a female never get the actions right.

The banter built up something like this over a period of time.

To this I would say "You need more practice".

Mum picked up on this one time and said "If practice makes perfect I'll have to find a volunteer".

I told her jovially "Dad will show you".

Mum replied with "Hughhh, no thank you".

"Why can't you handle 8 inches", I said jokingly.

"I wish" Mum responded straight away.

"You'll have to pop in one morning with a cuppa when I'm randist", I said.

"Don't temp me Son, I'll do it just to embarrass you Big Boy", and wiggled her little finger with a grin.

This was all good fun between Mum and I.

The next Saturday after her comment Mum did come into my bedroom after knocking but waiting for an answer with two cuppa's. Putting them down Mum sat on the bed in her nightie and dressing gown.

I starred at her in surprise, Mum just lifted her eyebrows and said "Have I missed the 'big' event Brian.

"Ah, no" I mumbled.

Then in all seriousness said "Well get on with it", Dads at work. "Not shy are we. You've shown me all the actions".

My heart was racing "But Mum" I stuttered "It was a joke".

"Oh your willy is a joke is it" she laughed and embarrassed me, "Shame!!".

With that Mum said seriously "It's no joke to me. I want to see the 8 inches my future Daughter-in-Law has in store for her", she smirked.

With that my heart wasn't racing so much and I began getting a stiffy knowing Mum was serious. I had a large mouthful of tea and put the cup down. Put my hand under the duvet, took my penis in hand and began masturbating.

"Good boy" Mum said and looking me in the eye, as if wanting permission put her hand on the duvet.

Nodding to Mum, she pulled the cover off me, by then my stiffy was a full blown hard-on. Mum sucked on her breath and gasped. I continued masturbating and Mum just starred.

Mum took her eye off my erect penis and looking me in the eye saying "Can I please".

Nodding yes, Mum took me in hand and continued the movement for a minute.

Then Mum uttered the words "Tell me if I'm doing it wrong, I've not done this for a long time".

The pre-cum was coming over her hands, my purple head was exposed as my foreskin slopped over down. Mums forefinger and thumb was covered in my juice's.

Mum said "My".

I gowned.

Mum changed hands and licked the one she had been using saying "You taste good Son. You weren't kidding you can't be far off 8 inches".

Being more confident I said "Be alright for your Daughter-in-Law, Mum?".

"Be alright for anybody from 18 to 80", Mum changed hands and cleaning up her left hand with her tongue said "Brian you must have been in the front of the queue when these were issued out, you lucky boy".

"Mum, I'm not far off cumming".

"Don't let me stop you, such a shame to waste it" Mum said.

"With that I shot all over my chest and stomach, jerking my pelvis while I did. Mum carried on with her hand till I subsided.

"My, my Son such a lot of cum". Looking at me said "Hope the tea hasn't gone cold".

Looking at all the cum on me Mum shook her head saying "No wonder the sheets are so stiff. Is this the amount every time".

"Suppose so, well the first time" I said. Mum put her finger in it and lifted to her mouth leaning like a spiders silk web.

"What do you mean the first time", Mum asked questioningly.

"Well the second time its not so intense Mum". Mum bent her head and licked my cum off my chest and stomach.

"And when will that be Brian?".

"Well doing that has made me stir again", I said "drink your tea and he might be up again".

"What, no, can't happen. Your Dad can't", Mum said "has trouble once".

"That's the difference of 25 years Mum".

"You are right Son, he is standing up again for fine weather".

Mum started masturbating me again, "Can't believe it Brian and so hard again, so soon".

"It's all yours Mum".

"Brian, I know it's wrong but........... but......... would you mind if I........ sat on it please".

"Of course not Mum".

With that Mum got off the bed, raised her nightie and removed her knickers and put them on my chest. She straddled me on the bed, knees either side of my hips, placed her hand round my penis and lined it up with her virgina and lowered herself on to me. "Alright", she said.

I nodded not knowing what to expect.

Mum started to raise and lower her body on my penis. "Is this your first time Brian?".

"Yes Mum".

"Well lay back and enjoy it, I'm going to try to climax before you but if it doesn't happen don't worry". Mum carried on bobbing up and down rhythmically. Mum was moving around on me and said "I'm trying to best position myself so you stimulate my clitoris which you will have learned about in biology. Found it. Wont be long before I cum now, please don't cum yourself".

With that Mum shut up and her breathing became more erratic, her movements more forceful then. "Brian, Brian, so good, can't believe it Son", partially collapsing on my chest Mum kissed me, her heavy breathing subsided and sat up. "Now your turn, thank you for holding back. I'll carry on till you cum inside me, hope you enjoy as much as me".

Mum's rhythm continued while looking down on me.

"Mum, Mum, I........I......can't stop, sorry" and with that I climaxed inside her. "Oh Mum that was wonderful, thank you, I love you so much".

"So you should Son, I'm your mother". With that my erection subsided and Mum got off me and that was the first time I saw her virgina and all our cum dripping over me.

Sitting back on the bed Mum said "You are a Big Boy my stud. Did you enjoy that?".

With a big cheesy grin said "Helped to pass the time", followed by a gentle slap.

"Cheeky", now lets clean you up, Mum went down on me with her mouth to clean me up.

"Oh that's nice" I said.

"Another time if you keep 'stum', you've given me more pleasure than I've had in a long time. Now while I clean myself up and change, you have a doze and I'll come back and we can have a chat, deal?"

"Yes Mum".

Next thing I remember was Mum gently waking me with another cuppa saying "Wake up Brian". With a cuppa in my hand "Mum said "Dad will be home in an hour so I want you up, washed and dressed, okay?

"Up again, so soon" I said jovially, "should be able to manage it".

"No Brian Darling, the shower", Mum retorted. "Normally your Dad and I go down the Pub on a Saturday night so I thought I might feign a headache, he wont mind and we can continue your education What do you say?".

"Well if it's for the benefit of your future Daughter-in-Law, suppose I'd better say yes Mummy".

"Correct answer Son".

That's how my affair started with Mum and like an Ariston it went 'on and on and on'.

Sorry its a bit long winded but wanted to contribute.

Love your writing.

REgards

17 years old and love using my imagination more than the million of videos online

Loved your story. I dream about loving two women myself, not necessarily mom and sister, but at least sister being one of the two... always have wondered what it is like to be able to love and make love with two women??

I look forward to reading more of your stories... thanks

wish it could have been me in the middle of those two. Love how you keep it sexy and erotic without being nasty or violent or having to introduce the whole extended family and friends. This is the way erotic stories should be written.

Then I thought "why bother, it's all been said." Then thought AGAIN thinking "doesn't matter how often"

Heck I probably have left a comment before.

I see the scenes: innocent , lustfull people on a deserted island, marrying eah other naked. I detect strong strains of hippydom.

You manage to hit ideas ecplore them and keep it erotic and innocent.

I thank you.

(And a lot of others already have)

Stay with us.

I really loved this story. I also would marry and fuck them pregnant over and over!!!

This was a great story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. One thing I'd personally like to have seen would have been more build up throughout the story. Still gave you 5 stars though! Keep up the good work! :)

Great story. Wish i had the mindset and a deep thinker to even write a portion of what you did here. Great job on an exiting and sexy story. I got so lost in your story and plan to read more of your writings.

This was a classic builder of a story. Hugely erotic and wonderfully descriptive. Families should live this this.

Excellent build up of the characters and the story was very sexy.

What a vacation to hey had and all three enjoyed it so much. Thank

for a detailed of the sexual activities. I don't know if I could share with anyone

Sexual. I'm a little greedy and selfish.

Hot and sexy, made me horny.

Children born of incest often have birth defects and limited life spans. This is why family members are usually disinterested or repelled by the thought of sex. The violation of this normal taboo is what makes the story hot. Not at all realistic but a fantasy well-written.

Fun, sexy, taboo, lighthearted, excellent.

What an awesome way to live. My wife and I speak about living our lives like this if we had our own family. We don't think there is anything wrong with being a very open and loving family. We also agree that what goes on behind our closed doors is up to our family. It turns us both on in a big way when we speak about this subject.

Very good story BUT you could write a bit more stuff like a background about the family and other more detailed stuff. Story like that could easily be 9-10 pages!

Mother/son sex is always best, but add a siser I guess it's ok, But don't add any more.................. thanks for the read

I get mother and son sex but marrying them is just messed up the child's mom is also gonna be her grandma

Many, many years ago when I was twenty-three

I was married to a widow who was pretty as can be.

Tom Arnold's "I'm my own grandpa"

Great story. Well written.....schwing.

This was a stupendous story scouries. The ending felt rushed though. But this definitely needs a follow-up; what does Patty end up having: boy or girl? Do they ever return to their ocean side beach cottage? IF they do, do they eventually rebuild the original house so that they have more room for them and the children that they have together? Do Christine and Patty have more than one child with Bobby, and how many more?

, but he did

I loved it. I thought it had enough background because of what he had to go through into get the pussy. My brother and I fucked a few times, but his dick wasn't big enough for me. Its so sexy that the fucking was so good they committed to each other and mom wanted to have a baby. I came so damn good!!!

It's 2017 now and I don't know if you're still writing, but this was a fine story. Just the right pace in development, and the emotion was just perfect. The sister being older was the finishing touch. Just two things: Does every story have to include a huge cock? And why does the son have to be so old? I've heard boys all my life say they were turned on at extremely young ages by older women. Just my tastes, I guess. I hope you keep writing...or return to it.

Has is ever occurred to you to have someone read your work before submitting it. There are words missing in your text; there are spelling errors; there are grammatical errors of tense and verb form. All of these detract from an otherwise lovely little fantasy story. Keep writing, but as Hemingway said "the genius is in the editing".

But give it a more romantic title and make it seem real. The problem I have is that everyone always writes in how big the dick is. It's a romance not a porno...I want more elegant writing and I believe you could do that. Bobby was the best male lead for a story so wonderful...

I liked it because it brought back memories. Not that I fucked my Mom, but me, then aged 14, and my brother, then aged 16, did fuck her sister (my Aunt) and my two sisters when we were on holiday together. A lot of what you describe is pretty much what happened, not at the seaside, our place was/is a lake and sail boats. My aunt was pregnant immediately after that...her husband thinks it is his but as she said he only fucked her once a month the odds are strong that our "new" cousin who is now 12 years old is definitely mine or my brothers. We used condoms with our 18 and 20 year old sisters but aunty was far too horny and fertile and only wanted us bareback. We seeded her together with double penetrations and one-on-ones many times that holiday. We still fuck our sisters who are now in their 30's and married with a kid each. Not ours as we only use condoms with the sisters. Feel free to use the info if you want incorporate into another chapter!