All Comments on '"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned'

I truly got lost in this story.The way it was written is amazing, the descriptions and the whole story made me want to be bobby. Altho im not into incest myself, it is one of the best, detailed stories I've read making my ooze pre cum from my penis.

You Just Should Of Kept Patty As The Wife .. Not The Mom

i like some of the other reply's are not into incest but i do enjoy reading about it and a lot of other topics and i have to say i really enjoyed your story it was one of the best i have ever read in this category or any other for that matter. i hope you keep writing to be honest your story was so good i think i will try my luck at writing some myself starting with a nice incest story or a slow paced romance no telling well again great story please keep writing. and for the record even though this story was fictional i have meet some real life versions of incest growing up years ago but they never seemed this interesting of course i was still a child back then lol. i am sure there are a lot of them around that we as normal people just do not know about but i be leave that is a choice for two or more i guess consenting adults. me personally i hope to one day find a good woman to settle down with who shares my love of good stories real ones and fictional ones. i am going off to collage soon for some more courses in computer programming but in my free time i think i will try my hand at some writing wish me well bye

technicly if a mother and son or brother and sister had a baby the baby would be deformed

reason: when a woman gives birth she passes on all the genes of the father and mother but some genes dont show becuz they are not dominant but when 2 siblins have a kid they both pass on the same genes twice making all genes dominant so if the people have a bad gene say a cleft lip gene the baby will have a cleft lip they will get all the bad parts of both people

get past the incestual weirdness...i loved it. i enjoyed the personalities, fun and interesting which really made the plot. i found myself eagerly waiting to see what was gonna happen, and not even the sexual aspect of it. great writing.

I liked the fact that they both took turns and knew when the other was doing it.

My sister shared her tits with me when they were first nothing but little nubs. Every day after school we would go to my bedroom and I'd strip her naked and we'd enjoy one another's body. Eventually we fucked. She was 14 and I was 17 and could never get enough of one another. We even managed to get 2 weeks together when the rest of the family went on vacation! I think we fucked in every room of that house and rarely put any clothes on! Our relationship continued for many years and at one point she even wanted my baby! She had two of them and both are very normal! After each of the babies was born the sex got incredibly even hotter as I would enjoy her milk whenever we had sex! When she would orgasm her tits would squirt warm sweet milk into my mouth! For those of you who haven't tried it the taboo part of this kind of relationship takes the sex to a whole other level! Nothing better!

I've read it twice and enjoyed it as much the second time, I may even go for thirds

I'm so glad that I was able to find this story again. I had been looking for it for months since it was my favorite. I finaly give up on finding it today and BAM there it is. I have to admit that this story was 10x better the 2nd time around.

I'm so happy that I found it.

Also the point of the story is not the children that he has with his mother, because going by bthe logic that some genes will not show because they are the same then the children he has with his sister would also be deformed.

The point of the story was that he loves his mother AND his sister.

Patty should of had the first baby not the mom SLUT

i loved this story it made me so horny and boy did me and my wife enjoy it thank you for the great work

toooooooooo freakinnnnnnnnnngggg gooooooooooddddddddd..............

OhhhMyGodddd I am so fuckinqq wet!!

it was good but the end was stupid. since they all have the same last name they can not live as " a husband his wife and HER mother" as you wrote. the only way it would work is if it was " a husband his wife and HIS mother" over all it was good but watch the STUPID ERRORS they ruin the stories.

I really like the Incest stories, the "mother/son" ones best and then the "brother/sister" ones next. So this story pushed all my buttons. Well done, scouries, very well done!

One of the best I have read

Wow, this story had it all to me. Man, I felt like I was living the story while reading it.

I believe this story was one of the most unrealistic. If the girl was a virgin, wouldnt she feel some pain instead of pure pleasure? And why would the mother accept it so easily?

best story ever

Erotic tale, enjnoyable, would have been able to read the remaiknikng "parts" ; would enjoy reading the author's ...forever after.

It Was Wonderful But I Didn't. Except Them To Get Married And Have Kids Like That. That Really Really Surprised Me.

i have enjoyed this HEAVEN MORE THAN 100 TIMES

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writing anymore please!

I was so turned on through out the story. Great Great Great!

I have a confession, my older sister and I pretend have sex (ie dry humping or playing with each other) but never would we think of doing it for real.

Great story, exept for the part about mum was ... well yeah so 10/10 nice work.

One of the best stories ever. I would love to have a continuation. . . EndLess Possibilities!!! Keep up the fine writing!!!!!!!!

Wow! your story is great! I've only started to read on this site and this story is one of my faves!

Keep up the good work! Write more! Mabye continue the story...? Cause it's my guilty pleasure!!!

i really liked it but i dont think the mother should of had the baby or been married to her son other then that i really liked it

My favorite type of incest story is mother/son followed by brother sister. Both missions accomplished.

I absolutely love brother sister love, and if the mother is included, hey...

I consider it a tragedy that I grew u with 4 brothers but perhaps this explains why I love all women.

Well-developed, with a great ending. I like brother-sister, but the loving mother made it more special. I also especially like it when there is true love involved. Looking forward to more.

this is perfect. i don't know what to say other that perfect i read it and i will keep it in my favorites and will read it again!!! thank you hope there is more to this amazing family!!!

The story is awesome through out but it's the part he makes his mom and sis pregnant is the most enjoyable...

I simply enjoyed this story. Nicely written and well put together, very erotic without being vulgar.

It was just very cool. I loved the way Bobby teased Patty, and you could sense that his feelings for his mother and sister were much deeper than lust. VERY descriptive by the way :)

such a beautiful story of love and acceptance. keep writing more

Jizz

Did anyone else see the sister scream "JIMMY"?

Mmm, I swear, I came almost every time one of them did! Though, still don't know why she screamed Jimmy. But I was focused on other things, at the moment.

Really good. ;)

Hope to read more!

I think that this story is quite good. I very much enjoyed this entire story. I wish there was a little more of a description of how the characters looked in the beginning of the story though. I also found some of the conversations confusing in the way that they were written. But, all else aside, an excellent story.

Super premise and unfolding of plot...Too much dialog.

Would be hotter at the end to have his girlfriend and her mom join the harem, engaging in 4-way hot lesbian loving with his mom and sister. the 2 mothers could have a daughter swap, swinging with each other's girl...the guy gets to fuck any or all of them each night, has babies by all of them, all daughters whom grow up lesbian....Excuse me, I've got to go wake up my mom and see if she'd like to have a little girl....!

lovedit

What a magnificent story. Well written - arousing and just plain HOT !! I hope you'll write another chapter, about the playful sex and different things they try. Thank you.

absolutely loved it..... my tits have been hanging out of my shirt... wish bobby was here......

Good job Scouries, i like your stories.

that was so spectacular! i loved it so much, i couldnt stop touching myself and moaning. i wish my older sister was around; i dont think she would mind doing this with her baby sister

one of the best stories i have read!!!!!!!!

Yes I had about the same experiance and My mom had my baby, now I am screing my dau and she wants a baby too

One of the best stories i've read since i've been on this site. Keep up the good work pal!

Good story,first of it's type I read. Imagine not only loving your mother and sis but "marrying" them too.

Good moments but so far from possible - come on- who would want a baby in this deal? Just TOO Ridiculous

I wish I was the one marring them.

I liked this a lot. The mother/son bit isn't really my thing, but I LOVED the brother/sister stuff. Lucky Patty. I want a brother like that - one who'll fuck the life out of me

The only thing is that i got a little too romantic and not enough actual sex. Mind you, I'm not saying i dislike the romance.

We loved the HOT story... Please keep writing 'em. I married my niece, her daughter & my sister & my niece is having twins in 9 weeks. And her daughter is late too. Yea!

WOW WHAT A BEAUTIFULL /SEXY STORY, YES IT COULD POSSIABLEY HAPPEN, TO BE REALLY IN LOVE AND HAVE SUCH GOOD POWERFULL SEX IS A ABSERLUTE BLESSING , AND THE NAUGHTY INCEST PART OFF IT WILL ALWAYS KEEP IT HOT; REGARDS PETER

That was one hell of a story. I really enjoyed it, I started to jack off halfways thur the story when his sister grab his dick, DAMN, that was a good story, GREAT JOB WRITER

I wish my sister would fuck me like that

after reading this we made love all night long. we have been having sex since i was 16 and first did it with my mom. then after about 3months my sister who was 14 jioned in when she caught us. we have been doing it on and off for nearly 34years now and dont regreat it one bit. my wife knows and has just started to join us and we have a 14yo daughter we are going to bring into the fold.

It is one of the best story so far i'hve read.....i like the romance in it....

Itz reli d best one ever. Fucking the two is great

I can't even begin to tell you how much I enjoyed that story. I know it was fiction, but I wish more than anything that I could live that life. Thank you so much. Please write more.

Great story incest is great

Apparently this is the second most viewed, voted and commented on story on the site. The first is his dad/daughter thing which I'm not into so I can't judge that one. I'm all about sis/bro, son/mom, and bro/sis/mom threesomes though, so I was really excited to read this because of the attention it got. And when I read it I thought that this was....pretty good, but not the best thing I've read on the site. I dunno. It felt a bit...too unrealistic. There's barely any reluctance or taboo feel to the incest, which is the best part in my opinion, and starting it out with him already having slept with the mother and her being totally okay with it with no reservations I thought deflated it a lot. The sister was sort of reluctant at first but not nearly enough.

weird right.

Awesome writing skill. one of the very few times that I've found myself drawn in to the story to the point of being genuinely exited for the characters, as though I knew them personally. I only wish it was a little longer. Of the hundreds of these stories that I have read over the years, this is the first one that I've given feedback on. looking forward to reading more exiting, erotic fiction from my new favorite author. Good fucking job!

i love the story and i love the happily ever after part...

Omg that was amazing

That was a very good read.

your story made me so horny that i stopped reading and fucked my Gf.

Beautifully done with the building excitment leading up to an orgasmic cum filled ending and finishing it off with the bible blessing was a great touch also... ;-)

Most of the story was good. Plenty of teasing the reader, building up to the main events. Still, the ending was all just a little too happy and like a fairy tale for my exact taste. Maybe others liked it, but I think there could have been more.

Still, good job. Keep writing.

You ARE such a lucky gut, it's something I ALWAYS wanted to do. Have My mom, AND sister as My lovers and wives. For them to have My babies, and bring them up in a loving house hold. And to bring My daughters into womanhood....

God youre story was great. I was so hot when i finnished. I loved it. The detail and description was awesome too. Good job and definitely thanks for posting!

It was a spellbinding storry once eveeryone got their priorities sorted out. Sister wanted his cock fucking her. Mommy wanted his cock fucking her and he wanted to fuck both his sister and his mom.. In the end it all worked out and he knocked mommy up first, then knocked his sister up second. If they all enjoyed themselves and wanted it to be that way, so be it.

Perhaps a little sequel later on down the road.

I love this story. It made me so horny. Great details and love the plot. I wish I was that guy. He so lucky

I really wanted to read this, but after reading the first half page several times and still not piecing things together, I gave up. It is one thing to build a story line, but another to totally confuse a reader. You obviously know all the characters and how they fit, but give us a bit of a clue as to what on earth is going on, early enough to keep us interested and understanding of who is who and what is what!

The sex was hot and the end oddly romantic

It was amazing i never got borad of the plot which i normally do. Just fabulous i loved it good story!

Mmmmmmmm... I'm so fucking wet now, fingering myself!

wow!!!!!

I had to stop reading it and the pick up later, bacause I was cumming so

Many times , I even read it on the train and was squirming in my seat

And got a few looks, if the train wasn't full maybe I would have

Popped out a nipple :)

It's not often I give a "5 Star" rating, but when there is total consummation of incestual love, where the "matrimonial ceremony" of wedded bliss is initiated, and a family foundation of pregnancy occurs, the story gets my total blessing of the highest honor. In this story not only did these events occur, but they were planned and two family members, the mother and her daughter both were impregnated, and a cermonial marriage consummated the three new parents-- a husband and wives. The story is totally awessome, totally celestial, totally heavenly, totally unsurpassed!! This story reached the pinnacle, the ultimate of devotion and committment and the firm foundation of a future so full of admiration and love that no other life style could equal!!

The story/writing could have had more detail, and been slower in reaching the final stages of their committments and pregnancies. Although the messages and intents of the characters (Mother Christine, Daughter Patty and Son Billy) came through and was understood, still the message was a little confusing at times.

Though the story is short, the theme and subject matter were of epic proportions. More writing of this genre, this incestual nature, will be greatly appreciated by any readers of your efforts. Keep up the good work!!

i am still hard and cumming to it i have been since chapter 1

This has got to be one of the best stories i have ever read. I was hard from ch.1 and cumming all the way through!

Very, very erotic! Nice when you can end up with a happy ending.

More of this please

I liked the story as a whole and cummed twice during it. A great story and hope more are on their way!!!

Sexy and loving

brilliant story my mum caught me reading this and saw my erection and now we make love whenever we can

this is the best story by far ever written

Very well written story. I´m so very hooked on incest stories, brother-sister, son-mother, father-daughter. Even grandfather- granddaughters. My favorite...

I found it great, until he entered his sis for the first time without foreplay, or any prep. That was a letdown!

A very nice story, a little hard to believe but quite an exhilarating plot that we can all dream about. What a dream, BOTH MOTHER & SISTER, almost makes one want to dream all the time. Thank You!!!!

This is by far my favorite story that i have read so far on this sight... it is a beautiful literary peace and i encorurage you with all my might to keep writing ... it would suit you well as a career... Thank you Thank you Very Much...

it was a beautiful love story coupled with hot incest. if this were a movie id watch it .well done and hopefully more like this to come. thank you gor sharing this story

Yes,yes,yes.

Yes it is a good story, Reminds me of whne I first did my sis then later did my Step Mom, I am sti9ll doing my sis when ever my wife and I see her during a vist, we want sis to move in with us, we are in our late 60's sis is 62, still love good hot sex:)

Keep them coming.

A well balanced story, as one was reading, one became apart of it.