by Canis_Crazy
oh keep it coming
it is awesome
i m big fan of these kind of stories,
and urs is very gud
dont keep us waiting
keep submitting as fast as possible
Please keep this story going....good story line and nicely written. Need more don't tease us please.
I'm hooked!! Usually people don't write stories about the omegas! I'm so glad that you are doing it though, I had always wanted a love story that had an omega as lead instead of a human. please update soon, I want to know her mate is~!
That was so emotional. I felt her fear,brought tears to my eyes. Can not wait for the next chapter.
I loved the last chapter and I love this one even more! I love the story so far, please please please continue?? It's such a refreshing and addictive story :) Well done, your writing style is fantastic, as is your plot and character development.
I think you are one of my new favorite writers.
This is a interesting story and I can't wait for further updates.
great stuff!
*****
please write more soon!! Hopefully you'll make the chapters longer. You definitely earned a bookmark with this story.
NIcely done. I like the emotions you convey. I would liked for it to have been a bit longer though. I felt like it ended as it was just getting good. Hope for more soon.
1, great so far, cant wait till he finds out her true home pack's identity (something emotional or what-not)...
and 2: from your bio page fetish list: """futanari, impregnate""" just became a favorite author (even the vamp/were can be re-added, just pointed out my 2 fav's)... gratz
Very nice!
But what was so special about a smart omega wolf surviving alone...?
not another cliffhanger!!! I HATE WAITING!!! Post SOON!!! Please =^_^=PK
Post again soon! I love the start of this story and I really hope you intend to continue it unlike some stories which post 2 chapters to get you interested and then leave it. I know you only posted these yesterday but still hurry with the next chapter PLEASE!
A note to EVERYONE! Some asswhole on Mibba.com is using my story for themselves. Type in Omega Pride on the story search. If people can, do what ever is in your power to shut them down. I am putting this on all my stories as if it continues, I will more than likely be taking my stories off. Thank you all!
I hope you don't take your story off. So far I'm very intrigued and would love ot see where you take it. I know how hard creative writing is, so I would hate to see you give up because of some jerk stealing your story. Hopefully you can figure out what's going on there. But even if you don't figure out who is plagiarizing you, I hope you don't deprive your avid readers of a fascinating read. Happy hunting.
I hope you don't take these down too! i'm hooked already and would love to see where they go!
I keep trying to rate you, not sure why it hasn't let me.. but 5 stars for both chapters so far! moving on to ch.3 :)
You're really a talented writer, you've made me connect with your main character and fear for her safety, just in a few pages.