All Comments on 'Omega Pride Ch. 02'

by Canis_Crazy

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cool66cool66almost 13 years ago

oh keep it coming

it is awesome

i m big fan of these kind of stories,

and urs is very gud

dont keep us waiting

keep submitting as fast as possible

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
awsome

Please keep this story going....good story line and nicely written. Need more don't tease us please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Love, love, love it. Please don't leave us hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I'm hooked!! Usually people don't write stories about the omegas! I'm so glad that you are doing it though, I had always wanted a love story that had an omega as lead instead of a human. please update soon, I want to know her mate is~!

popparazzipopparazzialmost 13 years ago
Wonderful

That was so emotional. I felt her fear,brought tears to my eyes. Can not wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wow!!

I loved the last chapter and I love this one even more! I love the story so far, please please please continue?? It's such a refreshing and addictive story :) Well done, your writing style is fantastic, as is your plot and character development.

mizzhot1mizzhot1almost 13 years ago
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!

I CANT WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT POST.......I LOVE IT

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wow!!

I think you are one of my new favorite writers.

This is a interesting story and I can't wait for further updates.

great stuff!

*****

cheetahgrl_07cheetahgrl_07almost 13 years ago
Please...

Please update soon. I am very intrigued by your story

samlove23samlove23almost 13 years ago

please keep going so far this is soooo good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Very intriguing

please write more soon!! Hopefully you'll make the chapters longer. You definitely earned a bookmark with this story.

Naisa11701Naisa11701almost 13 years ago
Good start

now i am all excited i hope you plan to post again soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wow!

can't wait for the next chapter=)

canndcanndalmost 13 years ago

NIcely done. I like the emotions you convey. I would liked for it to have been a bit longer though. I felt like it ended as it was just getting good. Hope for more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wow... 2 things...

1, great so far, cant wait till he finds out her true home pack's identity (something emotional or what-not)...

and 2: from your bio page fetish list: """futanari, impregnate""" just became a favorite author (even the vamp/were can be re-added, just pointed out my 2 fav's)... gratz

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
great beginning!

Very nice!

But what was so special about a smart omega wolf surviving alone...?

PaganKittyPaganKittyalmost 13 years ago
Ohhh man...

not another cliffhanger!!! I HATE WAITING!!! Post SOON!!! Please =^_^=PK

SecretSiobhanSecretSiobhanalmost 13 years ago
please please please

Post again soon! I love the start of this story and I really hope you intend to continue it unlike some stories which post 2 chapters to get you interested and then leave it. I know you only posted these yesterday but still hurry with the next chapter PLEASE!

sweet_icing3085sweet_icing3085almost 13 years ago
love your story!!!

please continue... ASAP!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

AUGH! How terrifying!

Canis_CrazyCanis_Crazyover 12 years agoAuthor
Listen Up

A note to EVERYONE! Some asswhole on Mibba.com is using my story for themselves. Type in Omega Pride on the story search. If people can, do what ever is in your power to shut them down. I am putting this on all my stories as if it continues, I will more than likely be taking my stories off. Thank you all!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I hope...

I hope you don't take your story off. So far I'm very intrigued and would love ot see where you take it. I know how hard creative writing is, so I would hate to see you give up because of some jerk stealing your story. Hopefully you can figure out what's going on there. But even if you don't figure out who is plagiarizing you, I hope you don't deprive your avid readers of a fascinating read. Happy hunting.

LadySpiceLadySpiceover 12 years ago
Great start!

I hope you don't take these down too! i'm hooked already and would love to see where they go!

I keep trying to rate you, not sure why it hasn't let me.. but 5 stars for both chapters so far! moving on to ch.3 :)

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago
Wow, Scary

You're really a talented writer, you've made me connect with your main character and fear for her safety, just in a few pages.

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