All Comments on 'On My Own'

Story cut too short.

Nice first effort. Keep it up!

good story, could have been a bit more descriptive as far as sex goes but hot

i love older men too....your description of him was wonderful, almost as if you were writing about a man you know. i agree that it could have been longer, but i bet you have more chapters planned now that these two have found each other.

I thought it was fantastic

Just an older guy wishin I had a neighbor like you....

Keep writing...

I'll be honest I fapped to it, but there were some inconstancy to your story, she says two days later that she runs into him again, yet during the intercourse he says "Yesterday" and nearby is one word not two, next time check it. Reading it out loud always helps.

I would not onlyfuck her .But I would also suck his cock and swallow all his cum call me 406 304 8714

I loved it as I dream about sucking cock all the time