All Comments on 'On The A-Train'

by reinaldokool

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
Fine writing

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I second that.

Thanks for the well-written story. I look forward to more!

Kelly213Kelly213about 11 years ago
Great Story

I especially liked your reference to Erica Jong.

Just two minor edits. 1. There are no shelves on the A train. 2. Even if there were, no one would leave anything valuable on them. LOL

But otherwise this is one of the nicer stories because it is very erotic, but not in-your-face and because it is well written.

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