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All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 05'

by Kathi

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Building nicely

Paced right, just like real life! Keep it up, and keep it coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very well paced

Like the story and you seem to know exactly when to stop each part just to keep us hanging on for more, please keep it going but not too long between each submission...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Get on with it!!!

Nothing is happening! Its good, but get to the point!

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