by smutpen
Hilarious yet erotically good and well written. Whats good for the goose is also good for the gander it is said. Can't wait to read what the mothers do or get.
momma with the perfect hourglass figure?? hmm...i wonder what i could possibly want to see next??
Well done! And part two is even more erotic!
Keep it up, please!
Sarah
(Oh, and ignore anonymous comments. Anyone who would leave anonymous comments is an insignificant coward.)
Apart for the abrupt transition from Abigail's orgasm to the the girls' mothers at another location, this reads well and is nicely erotic. There's something about forbidden sex that makes it all the hotter, isn't there?
was a few mistakes and errors in the novel that made me think less of it. the best example must be the 3rd line from the end that speaks of "black seed". other then such things it was pretty good.
sonata
I loved it. I love reading about big black cocks inside pretty white vaginas. It really turns me on. You can't just find stories like this in the mainstream or in hollywood. Well Done!
EXCELLENT Story !! LOVED it...Keept me HARD !
Nothing more exciting than a White Slut Servicing a Big Black Cock !!
This was really awsome and I would love to hear more.
Thank You.....Thank You,
STEVE
i always like stories about slaves and the sexy southern belles!
Great fuck story. Made me fucking cum all over my hand. My pussy is so juicy and wet it's all over my thighs.
Not as good as the last story but still very erotic, these stories really make me hot, the thought of living in those times and taking those huge black dicks when it was so taboo makes it all the more exciting. Stephanie.
Hilarious..Ik itโs suppose to be sexy but it was funny. ๐