All Comments on 'On the Prowl'

You have a gift of writting a story of dominance, that feels like it has very little submission, but does not turn into non-consentual. I like! Not that n/c is bad now and then, or that a little n/c is bad at all. That you make your main char gender neutral til late in the story is different. Many of the stories it is interesting. However, this story, to me, it interupted the flow of the story, as I thought it was a male telling the story. Not bad, per se, but it broke my immersion (sp) in the story.

Hope you like writting them as much as I enjoy reading them!