All Comments on 'Once In A While'

...utterly romantic without being cheesy.

It's a perfect little love story of grown ups with an added spice of perfection. A dream.

I like the way you characterized the two of them. A perfect example for showing everything without telling.

Thank you!

A great love story, you can feel the attraction between the two. Can't wait for the next one and see where you take us.

A perfect bull's-eye.

Roger

remember about the mountains. TK U MLJ LV NV

...story, well written. Good theme, good character development.

But as a writer you should know "...I really could have cared less", did not say what you meant. You really meant, according to the context, you cared so very little about the possible mistrial, you could *not* have care any less. That was exactly the opposite of what you wrote, you did care if there was a mistrial.

Unfortunately, that expression is so often misused, its intended meaning is often substituted by the reader. .

I guess it's true that prosecutors have the best sex. Who am I to argue? Although I do have a few theme suggestions. Write back.

I will be looking forward to the next segment of this story. it was definitely a 5 star!

papagriz

To my freind, my muse...

Whenever we wrote, briefly, before....

You always made me feel like I could capture this very essence.

Thanks for great memories....

I'm glad we didn't lose each other!!!

~ Your Fireman

Funny, with a big dash of positive.

Could probably fit better in Romance because it was that schmaltzy.

Sometimes things like this can happen in Fantasyland (Literotica) and no comment or explanation is needed. 5* for a good read. Too bad this author only made two contributions to this site and gave it up. This is a talent.