All Comments on 'One Fine Mess Ch. 01'

by Twisted_Little_Sister

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MizTMizTabout 12 years ago

Nice Start.....moving on to chapter 2

michassmichassabout 12 years ago
promising but needs a bit more thought

It needs a lot of editing; the writing is not consistent with that of a genius medical student (she would have to be a genius to be finishing up at the age of 22).

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