All Comments on 'One Night Only'

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MissSensesMissSensesover 14 years ago
Great story...

I'm one of those people that believe in the "sudden connection" with someone that you don't know. Keep writing, I will always return.

~Missy~

MikeyLoves269MikeyLoves269almost 16 years ago
Good Read

Loved the storyline. It carried me along all the way through. The only distraction was tense agreement, you slipped back and forth between present and past tense. Keep going!

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