All Comments on 'One Two Buckle My Shoe'

This is one of the best stories i have ever read, the power play is just amazing, and beleivable, the language used is so sensual. I love it.

It brought back fond memories of Personal Best, only this was better written and far sexier. Great sex scenes, the race scene was super realistic to the point where I paniced when I thought Lynne had failed, and I loved the shot putter, Maria winning State. Super story and I am anxious to read your others.