All Comments on 'Oregon Coast Ch. 02'

It was well planned and executed; your writing and descriptions were great. It was a piece that I would have expected from someone older who had learned more patience than the young people exhibit. Thank you for a very good read.

Read both stories and the second was a better version of the first. Great expansion of the characters and life. Thanks for the effort and look forward to any more tales you might share with us.

read both stories and they were well written funny and now the four of them need to gang up on dave and straighten him out

Congratulations on creating characters that your readers can appreciate and for recognizing that you needed to follow the story of Brian and Jennifer with the sequel. Don't abandon the two couples but flex your creative muscles on other scenarios as well.

Very intriguing story, extremely well developed characters and well written and definitely fun and enjoyable to read. Thank you for your effort. I rated five stars.

The romance is delightful and the people are fun.

the storyline didn't match up to Ch. 01. But then it all came together.

well done!

As someone who spent a misspent youth in Eugene and Roseburg I know a few of the family names. I had the tide tables memorized in order to know when to search the tide pools and climb the outer rocks. And I love Willamette Valley Pinot (dammit).

I could smell the salt on the breeze.

I reread these stories frequently...great to wrap myself in their positive vibes!

Thanks.

Same can be said for all of this writer's work. Extremely satisfying reads of which this is example.

A more-than-worthy Chapter 2 from the beginning! Impressive!

The LYDIA character is one of an entitled arrogant and frustrated bitch

Okay, I've now read the first four of your stories, which seems to be more than any other writer. YES, I am enthralled with your creations and look forward to reading more of them !

THANKS !

Scott