- NonHuman
- Orphan Ch. 02
- Page 3
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Jenabel relaxed in her mothers arms, she knew she was right, but the notion just wouldn't take hold in her heart.
"It will work out mother, it has too."
Sophie appreciated her daughter's display of hope. She wondered if the truth of the next few weeks would provide that her hope was well placed.
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Edited By: mikothebaby
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoIf this story was posted in 2011 and DI’s story in 2018?
Maybe you should check your facts before you start posting accusations.
Dak402about 5 years agoThis is basically retold version of The Silver Guardian by Daddyirishman
rightbankabout 8 years agoa deep reaction to the handshake.
a tradition of marriage with another family 100 miles away.
a strong attraction
so many little clues and hints at the mysterious.
maliceonover 9 years agoWow. I can not recall the last time a book held me in such suspense, wait yes I can, it was the 90s and it was a Stephen King book I think. So yeah I have felt this build maybe 2ce in my life. I LIKE IT. I am not a sci fi reader and not much for horror but this story is friggin awesome so far!!!
Anonymousabout 12 years ago.... but disappointed at the editing. mikothebaby appears to have just used the MS Word spellchecker to edit this :S
JazCullenalmost 13 years agoIt just gets more intriguing as it goes along. I'm really enjoying this story. The characters capture the attention and the whole mystery around not only Alexander but also the town pulls the reader in.
Raven_FLSTCalmost 13 years agoExcellent writing as always, and like the others, I can't wait to see what is next. You really make the characters come alive and it's so easy to get wrapped up in their 'lives'.
Socially_Ineptalmost 13 years agoI know two stories don't make a series. However, I am oh so hoping for another chapter. I can't wait to find out what everybody is. But I know a good series will give more questions than answers 'til near the end.
