All Comments on 'Oshun'

Just to clarify that I do know the meaning of the name Oshun. I've indeed done my research well before I ever wrote this story, or adopted her name.

Of course I'm going to put the highest rating. It's my story

You, sir, are a trip!

I have long suspected that a rain forest was capable of producing rain clouds without help from some ocean. Your far-away planet that is 100% rain forest proves it. The reason is that a large tree with all it's leaves has far more evaporation area than an ocean, and furthermore the evaporating medium does not have evaporation preventing salt to slow the process. Further proof of this is that cutting the South American Rain Forest is resulting in building a desert and not resulting in producing some big treeless swamp.

I would like to meet your oversexed black women. They sound like they would simplify administrative structure to a more pleasant understanding of the human condition.

Here's one example out of many, " between their plump and plump labia". Now what in blue hell is that supposed to mean?

emerald tropical shires whence they could settle and for time immemorial.emerald tropical shires whence they could settle and for time immemorial.

yall anonymous comments are so unimaginative and simple minded. Why even comment anything at all? don't like a story? move the fuck on. Its as simple as that.