All Comments on 'Our First Time with Another Couple'

...of stories written as if the reader had been there.

I REALLY THINK STORY WOULD HAVE BEEN STRONGER WRITTEN IN THE THIRD PERSON OR MAYBE FROM THE STRICT FIRST PERSON. MAYBE IT'S JUST ME BUT I CONTINUALLY HAD TO GO BACK TO SEE WHO WAS DOING WHAT. YOU DO HAVE A GOOD STORY IDEA AND I HOPE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WORK.

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