Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here*My own favourite is 'The later you get home, the more pleased a dog is to see you'.
- COMMENTS
robinhod7 months agoAuthorIt's mine! It's been lying there for more than 21 years and I've just re-read it, plus the comments.
Interesting...
I accept a lot of the criticisms. Why not? It's what this site is all about. Harry did his usual rant, who cares? I was highly delighted to receive encouragement from a top, top writer, JustWords. Generally I am flattered that so many readers took the trouble.
Mostly it confirmed my self belief, which is that I'm comfortable with words (albeit Brit ones), grammar, and spelling, but lacking in that talent which creates the magic of the best stories.
That's why I haven't submitted any further stories.
Anonymous7 months agono way a guy waits months after that letter if he still had feeling and love for his wife. ending needs more conclusion as to what happens other than holding her hand and a comment by his girlfriend
Bry1977about 1 year agoI liked the story however, the ending could have been more. could have shown more of what happened with them. set terms and stuff like that. no more seeing him no more fb no reunions stuff like that.
iameaselover 2 years agoThis whole story swung from one extreme to another and back again.
See this story exemplifies who writers skip over logical issues that are clear to all of us, because it makes it easier to get to where the writer is trying to go.
No woman would have talked to the man who helped fuck up her marriage if she truly wanted to save it. Secondly no one waits a year....aint gonna happen.
This is akin to the stories where the husband forgives the wife AFTER she fought like hell for months to save her marriage and get her husband to trust her again and he...shockingly finds her fucking around again. There's no logic in those stories, like there is no logic here.
