All Comments on 'Our New Neighbors Ch. 05'

by shapeshifter37

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gizzmo301gizzmo301almost 19 years ago
erotic but

A very erotic story but, open marriage is great but you still put your spouse first but with this story who is the spouse.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Well, I loved It

I like the idea that the couples returned to each other for a final fuck of the weekend. It shows they are together on this, both enjoying the events. And why shouldn't they. Oh to have such friends. To have a wife that continually pushes the right buttons to keep her guy aroused. Hell, who knows, if my wife even kidded about this sort of thing I might just let her take on a fuck buddy - as long as I get to hear all about it. Scrach that, this story is making me want her to fuck around! Yes, I want her to meet up with Kelly. Kelly would be a great influence!

don87654don87654almost 19 years ago
Very, Very, Very, Very good!

This weekend marriage arrangement needs to be extended for when they return to their homes. Then they could sell one home and all move in together 24/7. And perhaps the women could flush their Pills down the toilet, and when they got pregnant, the 4 of them could go out of state and into a different jurisdiction and legalize the "marriages" that were excluded to begin with, so that each wife is legally married to the other's husband.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I loved it

This story would be perfect, if there were 4 people who could get this close. I would think if it was real life they would all be bisexual. I think it is really a nice fantasy, I would enjoy something like that, but in real life there is always some one who gets jealous.

JIm7PussyAssJIm7PussyAssabout 13 years ago

Shapeshifter37 - Awesome story/series!! Well written and extremely erotic AND believable. Thank You! Jim

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
And they all Lived Happily Ever After

Yada yada yada

StubbyoneStubbyoneover 6 years ago
WOW Indeed !!

You, my friend, have incredible writing tenique. The run up to the swapping was brilliant. The descriptions of the sexual encounters was done masterfully. Incredibly erotic writing. Having said that, I read the note you left on your biography page. I'm so sorry that has happened to you. I guess it's one of the hazards of doing something behind your partners back. Acknowledging that it's still your fault for not telling her up front, it's still too bad that she didn't accept your quirk. It's not like anyone could figure out who the both of you are. Oh well, just my take. Good luck to you both. I hope you work it out. Thanks for sharing some amazing writing with us. Maybe one day you'll start again. I hope so. A 5, easily.😊

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