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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
good romance story, but-

This romance story is good, but it could have been better. For a story of love and tenderness, more attention should have been paid to the introduction, developing the plot more fully, and taking more time to describe the characters. The use of the second person present is not the best grammatical style to narrate a story, no matter how popular it has become in recent years.

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