All Comments on 'Out of Order'

Love a slut.

Though I found it hard to follow and difficult to find believable in places, none of that matters. This story was a blast to read. I liked a lot of the wordplay you used to describe Jessica and Shrew. It was vivid enough to put me in that bathroom with them, and was definitely enough to turn anyone on, including me. As far as what I said about it being unrealistic, we don't come to literotica for realism, we come for fantasy. You blended both nicely. Well done.

good work - keep it up and I will be waiting for reading the next:_)

I don't often read stories involving gang bangs as I find them either unrealistic or overly realistic and boring.

This was a good story that had me devouring each sentence as fast as I could. Once again thanks for a good read.

Loved this! And i love that one character that was kind to her and cared about rape/pedophilia, its always easier to cum to a story when im attracted to the guy in it and wow i had the hots for him haha great job